| "Military Warfare" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuAngel5878 On: August 29, 2004 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ YAY!! IM SO HAPPY U FINALLY UPDATED!! It was a great chapter jus like ALL the others! Usually after so long, some writers write differently but it was the same flow as if u wrote it consistently! (i know that sounds kinda off and hard to get... ^_^0 hope ya get wut i mean...) anywayz... i love ur story and hope its longer than jus 3 more chapters... JA NE! ^_^ V
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 22:34 CDT
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LOVLEY CHAPPIE!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 28, 2004 21:09 CDT
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Excellent chapter... Glad to see Inu finally making his move (now that thr threat of Kikyo is reduced for the time being) Seems like the only one not getting anywhere is Miroku...perhaps he should try a non-perverted approach? Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: kittygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 19:58 CDT
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i think u should do number 5 and iluved it i uved it i luved it
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Reviewed By: TehSexyPeach [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
#2 BUT YOU SHOULD THROW HER IN THE LAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...3 hours later...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *finally takes a breath* IM DONE!
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Reviewed By: Hatira On: August 28, 2004 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gerat job, oh, and I pick number 5 on ur vote list, anyways, hope you update soon au revior mon ami! ~*let the sun and the moon dance in the sparkles of the night...*~ ~*InuSessRoxx AKA: sesshomaru_luver on fanfiction.net*~
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 01:49 CDT
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This was really good !!! So ... whens the Inu/Kag lemon ?? lol ... Gods i love Sess hes so hot *drools* lol well update soon !!!!
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 11:16 CDT
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kay, i just read this fic and i must say,this is probably the funiest fic ever!!!you should be so proud about that, i laughed so hard my mom was giving me funny looks. poor hojo, no one knows his name and he has no friends. i almost cried for him. almost. and he still cant take a hint. and that was so good how you had inuyasha call kagome mate when she woke up. and that little fluff/lime with sess and Rin, excellent!!! and i completly agree with you on those quiznos commercials. those things just look plain nasty. their teeth busting out of their mouths like that-yuck! and i also love the Gieco comercials too. me and my brother always say it when it comes on. that poor girl loves that man, but he loves jessica...oh well, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Hiei81 On: August 18, 2004 18:21 CDT
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I haven't read the rest, but i must coment on this chap. I must agree with the brotherly love thingy. Even though i'm a girl. I was cuddling with my boyfriend in front of my LITTLE brother and he just went buzerk. He yelled at my boyfriend and thretent him. I was laughing my ass off for like three days. It was SO funny!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 01:14 CDT
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luv your fic plz update soon^^
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Reviewed By: IceYoukaiEnchantress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(need i say more?)^______________^ Ja ne!!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 11, 2004 19:02 CDT
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Excellent chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 11, 2004 18:48 CDT
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Interesting way to add Shippo, wondered when he would show up. Some how had a suspicion that he was going to pair off with Kiarra (Spelling?) Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 11, 2004 18:31 CDT
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Long chapter, very amusing, enjoyed it thoroughly. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: LSIE(Offline) On: July 11, 2004 18:13 CDT
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Update your damn story, Leah. Seriously.
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