| "Military Warfare" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: Melphina xpg On: June 05, 2004 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story buuuuuuuuuuuuuut hate Kikyou Can tou please put more Inuyasha/Kagome moments in bed and some thing bad to happen to kikyou in the contest she started in archery
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Reviewed By: AP [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 14:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
good, UPDATE SOON PLZ
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(2 lazy 2 sign in) On: June 02, 2004 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hugs u so hard that u cant breath* YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (dont ask i'm sugar high at the moment and am really scary. my friends are afraid of me when i'm sugar high) *does the happy dance* (a very scary dance that i do when i'm sugar high. dont ask i bought some hurshies chocolate i ate the whole big bag and it was yummy) ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ ^-^ SO MAKE SURE YOU UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^-^ ^-^ ^-^
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 18:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol way to go..
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 18:42 CDT
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.....Lotsa grammar/sp/Japanese/name errors.. One, tis Shippou. two, tis Sesshoumaru. three, tis Kikyou. four, tis yarou. five, tis Houjou. six, tis Kouga. seven, are Tetsusaiga/Toukijin/Tenseiga gonna be used in this story...? And you have a very unique writing style, haven't seen one like your's before...but you might wanna get another beta to go over your grammar/spelling mistakes, they take away from the story cos you have to stop and figure out what you mean. Tis very good otherwise *nods* update soon. Jaa na.
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Reviewed By: yeah... On: May 25, 2004 20:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
good
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Reviewed By: LightandDarkness4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have no idea why im reviewing twice prbably cuz im sugar-high....oh well, great story update soon! and you're hilarius! -Drakness-
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Reviewed By: LightandDarkness4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 22:31 CDT
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WWWWWWOOOOOOO! REALLY COOL STORY! PLEASE UPDATE SOON (OR IM GONNA SERIOUSLY HURT SOME1 NOT U)ANYWAY COOL AMAZING, THE GREATEST EVER...ETC PEACE -DARKNESS(NOT LIGHT)-
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update! I wanna see some action...if you know what I mean! I think you should have Rin/Fluffy have some 'action' first! ^_~ Well great story!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I likes it, I really likes it! Especially all those little funny comments in there by the random peoples ( gieko,umm, there's more, i swear! I forgots =( ) But pleaaaaaaaaaase write more, I'm addicted to the story now, and it's about 45.29482948 seconds away from going on my favorites list! yahoo for me, yahoo for you, yahoo for school! ( thank you Billy Madison!)ps- I adore the random will and grace,and just shoot my quotes, hehehehe! Till next time, Ciao! Adios, ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude!! UPDATE!!! I WON'T STOP BOTHERING YOU!! I LOVE YOUR STORY!! comon please?
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Reviewed By: Melphina_xgp [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 20:53 CDT
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P.S. I agree with the others. You really should save your inputs until the end. But then again, if that's your chosen style of writing...
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Reviewed By: Melphina_xgp [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, nice story! Your grammar is really not all that bad and your spelling is preety good, too. As for the plot,it is (while certainly not original) very intersting. I lkie the way the this story is written, too. Makes for light-hearted reading instead of all the talk about soulmates and eternity and angst and all that stuff. By the way, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 18, 2004 15:52 CDT
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put your authors notes in the begginning or the end or you wont have have a good fic PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!?!
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 18, 2004 15:52 CDT
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put your authors notes in the begginning or the end or you wont have have a good fic PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!?!
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