| "Military Warfare" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: LightandDarkness4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 22:31 CDT
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WWWWWWOOOOOOO! REALLY COOL STORY! PLEASE UPDATE SOON (OR IM GONNA SERIOUSLY HURT SOME1 NOT U)ANYWAY COOL AMAZING, THE GREATEST EVER...ETC PEACE -DARKNESS(NOT LIGHT)-
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update! I wanna see some action...if you know what I mean! I think you should have Rin/Fluffy have some 'action' first! ^_~ Well great story!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I likes it, I really likes it! Especially all those little funny comments in there by the random peoples ( gieko,umm, there's more, i swear! I forgots =( ) But pleaaaaaaaaaase write more, I'm addicted to the story now, and it's about 45.29482948 seconds away from going on my favorites list! yahoo for me, yahoo for you, yahoo for school! ( thank you Billy Madison!)ps- I adore the random will and grace,and just shoot my quotes, hehehehe! Till next time, Ciao! Adios, ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude!! UPDATE!!! I WON'T STOP BOTHERING YOU!! I LOVE YOUR STORY!! comon please?
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Reviewed By: Melphina_xgp [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 20:53 CDT
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P.S. I agree with the others. You really should save your inputs until the end. But then again, if that's your chosen style of writing...
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Reviewed By: Melphina_xgp [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Hey, nice story! Your grammar is really not all that bad and your spelling is preety good, too. As for the plot,it is (while certainly not original) very intersting. I lkie the way the this story is written, too. Makes for light-hearted reading instead of all the talk about soulmates and eternity and angst and all that stuff. By the way, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 18, 2004 15:52 CDT
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put your authors notes in the begginning or the end or you wont have have a good fic PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!?!
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 18, 2004 15:52 CDT
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put your authors notes in the begginning or the end or you wont have have a good fic PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!?!
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 18, 2004 15:52 CDT
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put your authors notes in the begginning or the end or you wont have have a good fic PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!?!
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 18, 2004 15:52 CDT
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put your authors notes in the begginning or the end or you wont have have a good fic PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!?!
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 18, 2004 15:52 CDT
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put your authors notes in the begginning or the end or you wont have have a good fic PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!?!
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 18, 2004 15:50 CDT
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yeah!very very funny!enjoyment is how you say very humorous.anyway update the ficcy!you said that you go in your sisters closet to write down the outfits that kikyo wears. whats up with your sis?
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Reviewed By: Hiei81 On: April 16, 2004 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH. MY. GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i just about died laughing. this fic is so damn funny. my brother came in and looked at me funnyly(is that a word?) because i was on the floor holding my stomec(sp?). he turned to the story...read it...then just staird at the computer... about a min later he was on floor with me... he's kinda slow... after words our mom had to take us to the hospital... thay suspected laughing gas... but i calmly (ya right)told them it was just a fan fic. they understud... i think. dun dun dun.^^'
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Reviewed By: IceDrake_5150 On: April 15, 2004 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
im writing this after chapter 3. You have them wake up at 6:00pm jus so you know, but please stop putting in all the authors notes, they make the story kinda hard to read
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Title: valene
Reviewed By: valene [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
really cute story...keep it going i love it*_*
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