| "Military Warfare" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 01:39 CDT
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all that lovie dovie stuff made me miss my boy friend. :( damn school work. and my roommate is gone so i even have the room to myself. man this sucks. nehoo. i liked the fic. yay Rin and Sesshy! up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Title: heh
Reviewed By: antisocial mint (not logged in) On: April 13, 2004 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
coolness UPDATE! really cute story i luv all the randomness!!
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Reviewed By: Orb (never online) On: April 13, 2004 15:20 CDT
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YAY!!!! UPDATE!!!! OOOOhhhh I missed this story SOOOOOOO much!!! Its super great. THe guys sleeping with the girls was to cute. ANd Inu saying "mate"? aww!!!! And racey racey Sess-chan and Rin, wow. I hope hope hope you udpate soon soon soon!!!
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Reviewed By: chelly On: March 18, 2004 01:10 CST
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lol i luv ur fanfic with ur author notez..they are juz so cute! and funnyy haha well nic storyy itz good keep up tha workk..!
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Title: Ur stiry Rocks!!!!!
Reviewed By: Latin_hanyo03 On: March 18, 2004 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing i saw wrong was the spelling mistakes.....the rest kicked ass!!!! I have to know....who does Kagome share the bed er...cabin with[Sorry but im a guy and were all a little like Muroku 0;)]Any who keep up the good work your creative as hell oh and if you steel Fluffy wont that make Rin sad :(......one more thing this story isnt turning into a lemon is it....SMACK! PUNCH! SLAP! POUND! HELL YES!!! owww...that would be from Kagome, Sango, Rin, Kiara and Kikyo(WHORE!!!) Yeah im crazy but we all are. Hope to see a new ch soon!!! Again kick ass story!!!!
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Reviewed By: Peachy_I_Am On: March 05, 2004 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ME: PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE YOUR fIC IT IS BY FAR THE GREATEST IN THE WORLD AND IF YOU DONT UPDATE I THINK I MIGHT DIE OF SUSPENSE!!! ASI: well then that would be one less Kagome and Inu-Yasha freak to deal with. ME: Take that back! you just mad because Kagome and Sesshomaru will mever end up together SO GET OVER IT!!! ASI: ... ME: I WIN! GO ME! YEAH SO ANYWAY PLEASE UPDATE IM DIEING HERE!!! again i lay i love your story it is the best all praiz!
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 09:57 CST
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Oh yeah I picked 1 and 2!!! Kikyo is suck a bitch!!!
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 09:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
About time so couples got together. I'm so happy Fluffy/Rin finally got a push in the right direction!!! Anyway I'm so happy you put Shippo/Kiara are together and you didn't put Kiara/Hojo!!! By the way is Hojo gonna be gay in this story, and when is Miroku/Sanog getting together!!! Please tell me!!! Email me at inumoon3@yahoo.com!!! Otherwise your story the best Inuyasha fic I've read on this site in a long time!!!! ^_^!!!
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Reviewed By: kikyohater#1 On: February 10, 2004 15:26 CST
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PAINTBALL???? lol i could just see them playing that!!! lol!!!! inuyasha and sesshomaru with the guns and everything!!! lol!!! and omg u don't know how right you are!!!! getting hit with a paintball hurts like you just cannot even imagine!!! i say that out of experience!!! and i still love your little author notes!!! they are so funny!!!! and congradualations on still having a boyfriend!!!! well great chpater and i hope that you update really really soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 01:09 CST
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Pink is a TINT of red, not a SHADE. A shade is a color+black, a tint is a color+white. I learned that in art club today *nod nod* Yes... I go to art club... don't... argh... Hehe... Wait... yeah, and when Kagome said yes... was that yes, she only said that to wake him up? Or something else? o.O Umm...right. Haha... they're sleeping together! COOL! I want Inuyasha to sleep with Kagome... umm... both... ways... yeah... stop staring! Yeah... well no question where Rin is going... wonder who's gunna sleep with Hojo... maybe they could trade Hojo for Shippo o.O Then Kirara'll go with Shippo... and Sango's with Miroku. Seeeeeee! Everything works out! *nod nod*... right... umm... uh huh... =D KEEP UPDATING!
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 19:55 CST
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P.s. offer still stands... anytime you need to uhh... get rid of... Sexy Sy... just send him over.... I'll keep him busy!!!! ^_^ *drool*
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 19:49 CST
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Ah! The new chapter sounds sooooo good! I love this fanfic! We never email anymore. So, where ya moving to? I just moved from Texas. Wait, does this mean you will be leaving everyone's favorite muse- Burcak? Could it be that the dinamic duo is splitting apart??? IT'S THE FIRST SIGN OF THE APPOCOLIPSE!! RUUUN!!!!! Update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: The target for ur damn claws On: February 09, 2004 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since one she is the ass not me two she takes to damn long to update nd threee she her grammar sucks but i gave her a 2 cause its not as bad as Burcak's grammar
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 02:53 CST
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mmmm oh how i wish i were Rin right now. i have always wanted to go painballing, my friends go all the time, but i've always been bissy or away, curse going to a school away from home, hmm. actually curse my friends for not coming with me to collage. nehoo. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 19:57 CST
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Yay! I'm sooooo glad you've updated. I missed this story soooooooooooooo much!!!!! It's still awsum and I hope you can update whenever you have time!
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