| "Two InuYashas" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Title: Join to be notified of updates.
Reviewed By: Miss Nikki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 17:35 EST
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http://members.notifylist.com/edit/joinlist Paste or click the link above.
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Reviewed By: IYlover4ver On: January 30, 2005 21:30 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story!! Whoa.. U got some talent as a author, this is a really entertaining story to read. I hope u update soon!!! PLEASE update soon!! U need to, more like have to!
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Reviewed By: Felicity_angel46 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 00:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Thanks and a great week to you too! I enjoyed this chapter! Crazy that they are complete opposites yet the same... o_0 ^-^
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: January 15, 2005 21:09 EST
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w00t it's good to see an update! Please keep up the great work and update asap. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Krystal.
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Title: Interesting!
Reviewed By: WhisperingMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 01:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I read the first chapter of your story and I have to say it's very good, except for a few grammar and misspelled words that can be easily corrected, heck I know I have them. I only have two more chapters to write in my story and when I finish I'm going to read the rest of yours to see what you've done with it. I like the idea of two Inuyashas. That's pretty cool! I added you to my yahoo messenger. You are one hyper child you know that? Calm down! lol *hands you soothing herbal tea*
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Reviewed By: Felicity_Angel46 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 03:08 EST
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And to "what happened to the BAM!" person. In the story it is only when she says osawari (sp?) like in the dubbed anime it is when she says "sit, boy" so sit as a passive command and SIT as an highly entertaining command is different. :P
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Felicity_Angel46 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 03:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As the title says "YAY!" I enjoyed reading the new chapters. They are very exciting! I am wondering though... why doesn't Kagome reconize them and their names... like the Sango and Shippo and Koga and such... Oh well....
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Title: sit doesn't work n e more?!?!?!?!
Reviewed By: loserchild On: December 08, 2004 17:38 EST
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*blink blink* kagome said sit... but nothing happened... she was like "inuyasha jsut sit down" and inuyasha sat down at his tree... what happened to the BAAAAAAAM!!! >.> good story btw... but doesn't inuyasha know taht that person is himself? =P
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 16:13 EST
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Oh, good, the page got fixed and I got another chapter to go with it!! Thanks so muck, you're sotry is great as usual. Can't wait to find out what happens in the next installment!
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 21:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm totally loving this story, but for some reason, the typing got all mixed up with symbols and stuff, but I pressed on reading through it all!! It's really good and I hope you update quickly!!
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Reviewed By: RayGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 16:57 EDT
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I love this stroy...oh and what was the whole war deal in rozefire's reviews for the story The Sinner? Anyway I love this story so much! You are one of my fave authors
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 03:27 EDT
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oooo good good good . Please keep up the great work and update asap. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: ShadoE On: July 10, 2004 09:17 EDT
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The storey is interesting but i can't but help to feel that you maybe painting yourself into a corner with two inuyasha's around. One of them is going to get the short straw (so to speak). It will be interesting to see what happens i guess we'll have to wait and see.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 02:27 EDT
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ooo good chapter! Please keep up the good work and update asap. I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 00:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this plot, I've only read one other story like it. You should really proof-read. The spelling mistakes I found seemd to be typeo's and you didn't look back over the cahpters to fix them. Kagome is ooc, I think thats mainly because you're putting your personality into her. Is this some lame attempt to get yourself with Inuyasha in some why? Bad girl! Oops that was a dog joke *snickers* But really try to keep her in character, makes the story more believable. The many author notes are very cute but they interrupt the story too much. You're the author, you're not suppose to mess up the flow of reading! *rolls up newspaper* I'll punish you if you do it again! I will now continue reading your story.
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