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Title: Adventures in Sunnydale
Reviewed By: Diane On: February 01, 2004 23:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this. You have a few typos, the ones that have been mentioned & youkai is misspelled in at least chapter 3, I think it's OK in the first 2 chapters. I read the first 2 chapters when they were originally posted & then I lost track of this & kept trying to find it with no luck so I'm really glad to find this again, especially with a new chapter. Any chance at longer chapters in future? They're kinda short IMO.
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Reviewed By: oracle44 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 19:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey good story it's probably the best buffy/inu story I've read. A few things though, Angel was in Buffy from thr very first episode (he was mysterious stranger guy), and "Zander" is actually spelled Xander (short for Alexander). Sorry just minor things Can't wait for Kagome to come in (though I am wondering why she would leave Japan if Inuyasha is missing?) Can't wait to see the explaination and what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good. I can't wait for the next. I keep wondering how they are going to ever understand each other and if that demon is going to try summoning someone else. I wonder who he'd get???
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Title: great job!
Reviewed By: Narani On: December 19, 2003 12:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. i hope you update it really soon, this chapter has made me very interested!
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Reviewed By: Pooglepoogle [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OO People want. People most assuredly want you to continue this. *stares at the computer, waiting for update*
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Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am intrigued! I haven't paid much attention over the years to Buffy, but I like your premise. I appreciate how you are developing this, and Inuyasha's reactions to Sunnydale (and the language barrier). Well done, and I look forward to seeing more of this fic!
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 21:56 CST
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good story, and im patient enough to wait till january, just please make sure to update as early as possible. and good luck.
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Reviewed By: Julie K [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the fight scene. You did an excellent job capturing both Inuyasha's and Buffy's personalities. I liked how you through in the line from the show. I just recently re watched the demon ink eps. Very nice touch. Please post more soon. This is really turning out to be very good.
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Reviewed By: Maggie On: December 09, 2003 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is a wonderful story! And I agree with Julie K, you made it seem very realistic. Inu Yasha is my favorite anime and I love Buffy! I can't wait for the next chapter! I do have one question though, will Spike be in this story? It's fine if he's not but just wondering since he was on the show for awhile...
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Title: Good premise
Reviewed By: Julie K [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the idea for this story. I think you could be off to a really good start. I haven't seen this type of cross over before. You acutally made it really plausible. Some cross over are either too impossible or completely ridiculous. I think this has a lot of potential. PLEASE, PLEASE continue. I just love both shows.
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Title: Adventures in Sunnydale
Reviewed By: Diane On: December 07, 2003 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I like it so far, only complaint I have is that the chapter was way to short. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl (not logged in) On: December 07, 2003 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes I am! ^^ I would love to see this continued!
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