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Reviewed By: ficfan On: June 02, 2004 11:27 CDT
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SSH-KAG!SESSH-KAG!SESSH-KAG!that counts for a ton of votes right! *begs on hands and knees* please please PLEASE sessh-kag! its not weird if you MAKE it interesting! just read Youkai Yume stories! they're sessh-kag and her story ForgetMeNot has like 400 reviews!so SESSH-KAG! ~ficfan~
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Reviewed By: lunar_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 20:56 CDT
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omg, are u really gonna make it a kag/sess? (eyes grows very wide) awwwwww, it just seems so weird for it to be a kag/sess.
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Reviewed By: Kumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEEEAAASSSEEEE MAKE IT INU/KAG!!!!!!!!!SESSHO IS SO REFINED AND BORING PERSON!!!! INU/KAG ARE EXCITING AND GET ALONG GOOD!!!!!!!!THEY ARE THE KIND OF COUPLE WHO GO THE BEACH AND GO TO FAIRS AND STUFF FUN AND HIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SESSHO/KAG WILL BORE OF EACHOTHER EASILY!!!!SESSHO/KAG ARE EEEWWWWWWWW!!!!!!! Itsumo ai,Love always, Kumiko
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Reviewed By: Kumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOOONNNNNNN!!!!!!!YOU HAVE TO!!!!!!!!!!!IT WAS GETTING EXCITING!!!!!!IF YOU DON'T UPDATE OT, I'LL DIIEEEE OF HEARTBREAK!!!!! I'M YOUR 1# FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Itsumo ai,Love always, Kumiko
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Reviewed By: Full_Demon_Inuyasha On: April 07, 2004 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ive only read up to chappie 5 or so but if their still voting im going with inu/kag
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Reviewed By: Sylvianna On: April 06, 2004 02:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm only on chapter four so I don't know if I'm too late for this but I want to beg you to keep it a Sess/Kag fic!!! *begs on knees* They are my favorite and there aren't enough of them! Aside from that, your story is really great! :)
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Reviewed By: little Rin On: April 04, 2004 22:54 CDT
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ACK! She's 10 and hasn't learned to talk yet? Awwwww! Shippo! *huggles shippo* *huggles Rin* *huggles Kouga* Poor guy... 13, huh? *borrows frying pan from Kooan (long story you don't want to know.... Just say she gets mad at me for stealing it) and bounces over to cook breakfast (also note: Giant frying pan made for hitting people in the head not cooking)* Do wolves like bacon and eggs? I know dogs do... Oh, I say Sesshy/Kag and Kouga needs a girl too. He needs one that can cook.... Hmmmm.... Makoto!!!! You know, Lita from Sailor Moon. "He looks like my old boyfriend" girl.
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Reviewed By: MGSFREEK101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 21:10 CST
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Hey I loved it. Please keep updating. My life depends on what happens next. lol. keep up the good work also please check out my fic (type MGSFREEK101 at the author's name search.)
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Reviewed By: ireadficslol On: April 03, 2004 21:05 CST
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Wow this fic is awesome. A nice blend of comedy and romance. what else to ask for? lol.
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Title: UpDaTe!!!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: April 03, 2004 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! Update!! Great chappie. Aw...how sweet. Inu-chan kissed her. Is this going to be a Sesshy/Kag fic? Please let it be that.
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Reviewed By: ihatealloryoupeople On: April 02, 2004 19:19 CST
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wats takingu so long? update plz?
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Reviewed By: kagfan On: March 25, 2004 19:43 CST
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o yea, i think mavin is starting to like kouga. so does the mean you are going to put kouga and mavin together?
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Reviewed By: kagfan On: March 25, 2004 19:42 CST
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um... i think u should put inu and kag together. everyone in the story acts funny. its like they are different people or something. the plot is a bit confusing. and yea... beisdes, doesnt seshoumaru wear make-up? seems weird for guys u noe. (ack, dont kill me for insulting seshoumaru if u r one of his fan) i for one dont like him. hes mean too. hope u update soon. its taking forever!!!!!! plz plz plz plz plz PULEASE!!!
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Title: Sess/Kag,Inu/Mav,Kouga?
Reviewed By: this is so kool On: March 24, 2004 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually Like Maven she sounds weird but I do like her. She deserves to be with her one true luv! ^-^ not to mention Sess/Kag is the best lol. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lainey On: March 15, 2004 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one sorry excuse for a story -_-; First of all you're confusing the plot. I don't know why all you people have to bring poor Kouga in here and in the end he gets stuck with the over-active Ayame. Maven? My god, what a bitch. What kind of chapter title is "Here comes the bitch carrying a stick"? Personally I enjoyed this story like in the...first chapter? Maven is a sorry excuse for an OC. Sesshoumaru is EXTREMELY OOC. I think the only characters that are the same is..well..Inuyasha. He's ruff, gruff and kick-ass. Please, I know that there is still hope for this story, make it better.
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