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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update. Update again soon. Can't wait to see if they find the Shikon, what happens to it and who becomes the evil person after it.
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Reviewed By: solqua [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
are you going to continue this story? it's really good
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 18:37 CDT
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Heh heh i dont lie! Well this chapter was funny and Shippou's addicion with home! (hope you update more often!) You know Kagome reminds me of Kikyou though she still has feelings for Shippou and im sure she still has them deeply for Inuyasha! Oh and eventually ones for Kurama! Well keep it up i love when you update!
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 14:52 CDT
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What type of youkai would this be? *looks thoughtful*
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: May 31, 2004 22:45 CDT
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Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Rosie13 (not on) On: May 31, 2004 15:44 CDT
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Weet! You updated! I'm so glad!!!Hum, lemme see...I think you should have more Kurama and Kagome moments. Those are fun. And get into what exactly is up with kagome and Inuysha and everyone. You don't want one of teh main characters to be kept in the air for too long. Then it just gets tiresome. Have Kurama try and figure out what's up with her gradually. Saying it all at once is boring and cliche. ANYWAY, I like teh new chapter. Please update again soon!!!! Later, Rosie13.
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: May 31, 2004 15:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG great chapter i love it you have to update it really soon ok thanks tootles
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Reviewed By: amara12453 On: May 31, 2004 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shippo is so cute!!! I love this story!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: kikitravel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 11:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Chapter 7
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Reviewed By: rosie13 (not on) On: May 10, 2004 20:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oi, I knwo what you mean!! All I need is a nice place to sit and listen to music while I come up with a chapter. Unfortunately, my room is almost always occupied, as well as the computer, and then the living room is never quiet, so... I guess thats why I don't update as often anymore. And yeah, I've been pretty overloaded with work lately as well. I know what you're going through. Oh, and by the way, I think I'm gonna lay off on the stories for now, 3 is enough!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 17:52 CDT
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i meant what i said i only like about maybe 3-4 crossover fics that ive read and i read A LOT of fics. Keep it up I loved the little flash back! It was great, i loved Shippou when he scowled when Kagome said that dogs did have a stronger smell! that was hilarious! Keep it up and i look forward to more chapters!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: May 09, 2004 17:36 CDT
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LOL!
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Reviewed By: nekokitsune16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love your stroy its original and creative i want ui to keep updaating so i can read it
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: April 26, 2004 17:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey great chapter you have to update it really soon ok thanks tootles
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Reviewed By: ShadowTigerDemon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 20:28 CST
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great story, continue.
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