| "Bloodthirsty - Friendship" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: mental [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 13:47 CDT
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Why would I kill you that's wierd I love your fic take as long as you want to update I don't care I'm not patient, but I'll try to be just please update soon I promice to be nice to you.I wish that I wasn't half asleep mus stay awake.Damn sleeping pills.zzzzzzzzzOh crap not again.Oh well I love you fic it's funny and wierd and uhm Sasuke and Naruto are straight(please continue with that 'cuz that's how they are in the anime and manga)and uhm I forgot my brain at school oh well I still love your fic please update soon.I gotta go and burry what's left of my doctor's dead body.I'm to brutal when it comes to murder oh well bye bye.(^_^).
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: May 07, 2004 09:30 CDT
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Good story so far.
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Reviewed By: mental [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 00:16 CDT
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I love your fic it's so funny please make a new chapter soon!HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!They got drunk the night before the exams!Yay I found someone else who thinks that Hinata and Naruto belong together!Your fic is the best write a new chapter as soon as you can!I promice to be nice.Will you be my friend?I'm gonna kill my friend for making me name his children.FOR THE LOVE OF GOD I'M ONLY A 13 YEAR OLD GIRL AND I ACT LIKE A BOY I CAN'T NAME CHILDREN(did I mention that he's 19 and that his kids don't got the same mom)!!!!!!!!!I'm gonna kill him for that MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!I gotta go and kill my doctor fr prescribin' me steroids I hate him oh well gotta go bye bye (^_^).
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Title: hahaha they all got drunk pricless
Reviewed By: gatomon1 On: February 26, 2004 04:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha ha oh man that was a great chapter they all got drunk you did it man you kept my attention on something i so want you to write more tell ya what i will start to write my own anime crossover fic again and i'll give you a copy of it first before i post it, it's good i promise ok but you gotta tell me straight if it's bad or good ok no lies. anyway i like to just reread your story alot i do so everyday and i still like it. signed gatomon
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Title: hahaha they all got drunk pricless
Reviewed By: gatomon1 On: February 26, 2004 04:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha ha oh man that was a great chapter they all got drunk you did it man you kept my attention on something i so want you to write more tell ya what i will start to write my own anime crossover fic again and i'll give you a copy of it first before i post it, it's good i promise ok but you gotta tell me straight if it's bad or good ok no lies. anyway i like to just reread your story alot i do so everyday and i still like it. signed gatomon
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Title: hahaha they all got drunk pricless
Reviewed By: gatomon1 On: February 26, 2004 04:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha ha oh man that was a great chapter they all got drunk you did it man you kept my attention on something i so want you to write more tell ya what i will start to write my own anime crossover fic again and i'll give you a copy of it first before i post it, it's good i promise ok but you gotta tell me straight if it's bad or good ok no lies. anyway i like to just reread your story alot i do so everyday and i still like it. signed gatomon
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Title: write more please
Reviewed By: myndless [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man that is the second time I've read it and it's still a good fic to read even for a second time you are a really good author and I commend you on a job well done. signed gatomon
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Title: please write more mister fanfic writer.
Reviewed By: gatomon1 On: February 17, 2004 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are one of the greatest writers I've come across what were you thinking when you came up with this fic man was it good. the soccor chapter was my favorite chapter to date it was one of the most original ideas i've ever come across. you are an inspiration you write a funny story throw in alot of angst when needed to make the story into something good and you write an all out epic for naruto one of my favorite anime ever. you know i've never written a review before and your my first one ever but hey if you write more i'll give some more reviews ok. contact me at gatomon1@alaska.com please i like to know if some one is actually reading this . anyway gotta go ja matta ne gatomon
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: *~Casey~* On: February 15, 2004 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's not going to end with chapter 15 is it? Noooooooo! Heehee, anyway, I like the pairings and ... ummm ... yeah. Your English isn't too bad, just a couple of small things that are understanable anyway. *sniffles* It's so hard to find a good, light hearted, Naruto ficcy! It made me laugh and smile and go "Eeeeek!" so you did good! Keep it up!
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Title: OOC???
Reviewed By: Naruto Fan On: February 02, 2004 13:30 CST
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Temari seems too OOC in this fic. But besides that it great! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: infernale On: January 30, 2004 10:14 CST
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great story! just, pleeeeeeeeeeease, let gaara talk just a little more ^_^
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Title: ???
Reviewed By: Zilies [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 16:11 CST
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It said u updated but theres nothing updated.
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Title: You are so very evil
Reviewed By: Marduk691 On: January 25, 2004 01:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so hard to find an entertaing straight naruto fanfic. The story is very involving and enteraining, keep up the great work
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Title: You are so very evil
Reviewed By: Marduk691 On: January 25, 2004 01:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so hard to find an entertaing straight naruto fanfic. The story is very involving and enteraining, keep up the great work
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Title: update
Reviewed By: smigug On: January 20, 2004 15:37 CST
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