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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 12:19 CDT
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Close to six months since the last review, but also liked it. And please don't take offense to asking you to please, please change the line in the last chapter to NOT have it say Inu's face melted off with passion. If you want I'll help you beta and fix some of the grammatical errors, but please..not the melting face! It's an excellent story of angst, but the small errors in certain areas are killing me. I love the plot, story as a whole though.
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Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you wrote this a long time ago, but I just read it for the first time and wanted to review to let you know how much I enjoyed it. I loved the angst both IY and Kagome go through, as well as the eventual ironing out of the problem. Thanks for writing such a good fic to share with all of us.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 08:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't believe I didn't review this story. I thought it was so sweet and romantic. You write beautifully and I hope you continue.
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Title: wow, wow WOW
Reviewed By: XxMystressDeathxX [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 05:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! This is such a moving and emotional fic! This is absolutely amazing! Would have made a nice lemmon ;) AMAZING!
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Title: aff.net cut off
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 not signed in On: October 04, 2005 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this story of adultfanfiction.net, a while back. In fact I read up to the last chapter, but because the last chapter on add.net ends with ('Seems like getting laid out on the ground is a far cry away from hoping she'd even have anything to do with you again, let alone look at you!') I thought it was a cliffy and waited and waited for more. Finally I figured that you must have abondoned aff.net for some reason and came searching for more here, and what do I find, but that there was quite a bit more to chapter six. So um anyways the point of all this rambling is that the "Kiss" chapter to this story on aff.net is cut off, leaving alot of hentai fans hanging precariously from an unintentinal cliff.
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Reviewed By: pookymon On: May 02, 2005 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is cool to think it all started because of inuyasha pulling kagome down. I love stories where inuyasha and kagome are a couple keep up the good work. It is one of the sweetest inuyasha stories i've read and it's romantic story without being vulgar.ait's sooo... SWEET
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Title: Good job
Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you did a REALLY Good job with this story, it was very creative, and your writing style is amazing... I'm a little disappointed this didn't end with a lemon but I understand that not all people feel it's necessary to include them, and I for one can't write them *blush* but ANYWAY, very good story and you are now added to my fav. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Sango_windwarrior On: May 24, 2004 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooooo cute! Soooo sweet! I wanted them to screw so bad! Lol I loved your story. I give it a 100000000000000000 on a scale of 1 to 10.
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Title: Pulling Her Down
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 00:16 CDT
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OK, this story just made me smile, and smile, and smile. Kinda gave me a little hitch in my breathing, ya know what I mean. I just love tender moments, and this story is just full of them. Great touch with the hickey's too. I gotta tell ya that I love your author's notes just a much. I laughed so hard when you were talking about being hesitant about letting a dog lick you because of the whole licking themselves thing, I almost pee'd my pants. I love your sense of humor, it comes across very well in your story. This is an excellent fic, and I have moved it to my fav fics, and you to my fav authors. Keep writing, and updating. Is this story done? Let me know.
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 14:32 CDT
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I love it, it's sweet and soft, one of the most sweetest story I've ever read... keep writing fanfictions, you're great!
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Reviewed By: PJ On: March 17, 2004 01:32 CST
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Great story!!! I really liked the end of the last chapter her saying about not knowing she had so many places for him to take care of. That is so funny I can't wait to see his reaction to 'that'. I hope he doesn't bolt or say something stupid. It would be kind of cute if he just laughed or chuckled and continued taking care of those places. *LOL* update soon this is good.
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Reviewed By: Feral Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 10:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy moly..,.. *points to bleeding scratch on her upper arm and pleads* Is it my turn to get licked? *giggles* Gah sorry but.. wow... talk about it getting warm in here. This is awesome. Another great fanfic my friend, and once again I am hooked. Oooh what I would give to be in Kagome's place. *sighs wistfully* Ah well... we can dream ne? Keep up the good work and make a new chapter asap!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: AMANDA_TRINH On: March 12, 2004 08:45 CST
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WILL U WRITE A LEMON 4 THIS?!?!PLEASE WRITE A LEMON 4 THIS FICY!!!UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: AMANDA_TRINH On: March 12, 2004 08:43 CST
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THAT WAS SO KAWAII!!!WILL THERE BE MORE CHAPPYS OR IS THAT IT?!?!
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 00:19 CST
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Gah! She's gonna stop him? o_O Why on Earth for? Don't stop there... I can smell a LEMON comming ^_^
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