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Title: butbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutBUT!!!
Reviewed By: Silver Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't even see it before new years! How do I get cookies? Can I get cookies for being nice? Or doing lotsa chores? Or asking if I can be a beta reader? I want cookies! *drooling while imagining cookies. . .* You like Tamora Pierce's books too?! I like 'em too! Erm. . . yeah. . .
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Reviewed By: ame-hime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome fic, but you might want to get another person to just check over it before you post it. Please update!!
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Reviewed By: ame-hime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Guess who's back, guess who's back, guess who's back?
Reviewed By: Maibe1 On: February 05, 2004 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI SC1 Cherry! It's me,ur 4 ever loyal fan! Now what is this rumor that I've heard? No up date? No chapie? AWWWWWWWWWW....... Any who, sorry for not writing earlier, it's jsut that my cuz got into happy hour in the holidays and he broke my computer with a bat... He said it was a Chinese tradition... pft, my ass... Anywho, he kida didn't got in trouble, but guess who did? It was tuddadan! *suspense in the air* ME! Soooooo, i was pretty damn grounded 4 life until i gambeled my freedom back! Lady luck must be going lesbian, cuz man did she smile, no *flirt* with me that day.... Oh, and then she hated me cuz my mom took away my internet until a day a go, but i begged my good for nothing father, and we negociated my freedom.... Man, i really don't have a life, now do I? *glares around for response* Guess not.... Hey, have any of you guys, and you SC! Cherry, seen Orphen? Cuz man he's one hot dude, and don't give me that skeptical stare cuz it's not like you don't think some of your anime characters are hot and/or cute! Ass! That's what anime's motto is! We only draw beautiful people, I mean look around, are there any fat ppl that are the main characters- not to hurt anyone's feelings considering myself with the "a little over grwoned population"-? So, yea.... UPDATE!Sayonara!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 10:19 CST
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ok. i seriously neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeed to know what happens! its tearing me apart *tears nose off and stomps on it* please update! please please pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: December 31, 2003 17:59 CST
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come on hurry and update this is my favorite crossover i neeeeeeeed to kno what happens!!! update soon!!!
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Title: fast learner kagome
Reviewed By: pimp player yolanda On: December 31, 2003 12:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiei/kagome.might as well make it a lemon between them.wen kag starts to train,kagome has a some tricks up her sleeves like matrial art fighting,using her energy as a whip,controlling people with out knowing it.oh and kagomes cuz-n pele,comes to check on kagome and gets in fights wit yuske who just loses.pele wears black chinese baggy pants,black chinese shirt like ranmas and inside is a black tang top,chinese shoes,wearing a hat,dark blue eyes,brugende red hair with brownish gold streaks.hair in a pontail.pele told them that she trained her cuz-n kagome on matril arts,and using her miko power to change into a whip or a sword.peles power-weahter,fire,ice,earth,water,etc.her nickname is ace.her story-wen she was lil,kag and her would just play but wen pele was now ace,pele also made kagome part of the royals.so ace has trained kagome pynress,a fighter
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: December 29, 2003 14:14 CST
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haha, very funny did you think i would write all that? FAT CHANCE! no i wrote UPDATE like 12 times then copied and pasted it like ohhh... 43294832 times! ^^ haha! i cant wait for the training to start! this is gonna be great! ^_^
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 13:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! I got cookie! -runs around the room singing the 'I got a cookie!' song- update soon! I can't wait until hiei and Kagome start to train! It will be so funny! I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 12:02 CST
Comment/Review:
hey i think that the story so far is great update soo ok tootles
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Reviewed By: Mistriss [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 11:07 CST
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I LIKE THESE TWO NEW CHAPTERS! i hope u update soon!plz
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Title: Yuki San
Reviewed By: Yuki san [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent style of writing! But you did have a few spelling errors that you might want to work on....But it was FUNNY, so in other words, UPDATE SOON!!!! BUH-BYE ^.~
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Reviewed By: BusinessMija aka Mija aka Maryann On: December 29, 2003 02:37 CST
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ya know I just loveeeeeeee this fic and sooooo cant wait for the angsty fighting lovers quarels that Kag and Hei will go threw hehe..im sooo evil..but hey I just soo have to see them at each other and then with each other if ya know what I mean..hehe please update soon much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 14:55 CST
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awesome story so far! i had a feeling you werent going to have hiei and kagome fall in love at first sight or something, its just not part of hiei's character to do that! cant wait til you update!! ^_^
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Title: orliesgirl25@aol.com
Reviewed By: Naimoi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 23:12 CST
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great story I finally found a Hiei/Kagome paring if you write others or find others e-mail me o yea and update soon btw how do you review a story noting that your a member i'm new to this hehe
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