| "Training" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: hieesgurl1489 On: June 13, 2005 13:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nee is female Nii is male
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Can't wait to see how you get Hiei/Kagome together and if everyone goes to the past to help Kagome with her mission. Please continue the story, it is great reading.
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Title: Training
Reviewed By: Nina's The Name On: March 08, 2005 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such A Great Story!!!!!!! Ow and my Name Just Happens To Be Nina Too. What Kind Of Demon Is Nina (if she is a demon)? And I Was Wondering How Did You Seem To Get Her Behaivor Like Mine. Prety Cool,But Back To The Story Please Update!!!
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Reviewed By: hieeisgurl1489 On: March 05, 2005 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
ive read Tamora Pierce witch book of hers did you read??
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Title: GOOD
Reviewed By: DragonHearts On: August 05, 2004 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good you shuld continue this fic, it's aot better than some i've read and origonal thanx bye
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Reviewed By: Karama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 11:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really like this story, but hurry the f~ck up and up update it before i come and beat the living Kuso out of you till you up date (-_-)
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Reviewed By: HannaShields [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so cool and can i borrow the "sit"necklaces i need them to control a sailor scout hope you write more seeya ^_~
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
*leans back* well, I'm not going to say much, besides the fact that you've made everything realistic.
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Title: i love it
Reviewed By: flygirl 13 On: May 08, 2004 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such an awesome fic update soon plz this is sooooooo coooooool
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Can't wait to see how hard Kagome's training is going to be.
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Reviewed By: maibe1 On: March 17, 2004 11:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a9 cuz you haven't updated! Anyway, hello! I finally read the cahp and it rox's! Hey... i was thinking, and maybe, could ya view my fanfic in fanfictionlog.com? It's called 'When worlds collide' and it's an LP fanfic, cuz LINKIN PARK RULZ! Yea, I'm obssesed wit them, specially Mike and well- all of 'em... But what I mean, their music, I wish I could play at lest the freakign guitar- I'm chaos and disturbance with an instrument.. But me favorites are Mike, Joe, Brad, and Chaz! YAY LP! Even though LPU is kinda expensive for me right now- I'm broke-y broke- it ruuuuuuuullllllezzzzz! Anywho, UPDATE for MEH sanity lad!
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Reviewed By: Summing Princess Abigail [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 16:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Your story is gooooooooooooooood. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. By the way Kagome friends names are Eri, Yuka, And Ayumi. If you want to chat about fanfics e-mail me at Abigailme2001@yahoo.com
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Title: YESSS Hee is a BAKA
Reviewed By: Shini Maxwell On: March 11, 2004 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes i love hiei ,but kuwabara to me is kuwaBAKA
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Title: butbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutbutBUT!!!
Reviewed By: Silver Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't even see it before new years! How do I get cookies? Can I get cookies for being nice? Or doing lotsa chores? Or asking if I can be a beta reader? I want cookies! *drooling while imagining cookies. . .* You like Tamora Pierce's books too?! I like 'em too! Erm. . . yeah. . .
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Reviewed By: ame-hime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome fic, but you might want to get another person to just check over it before you post it. Please update!!
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