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Title: ^___________^
Reviewed By: Barisax [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a great job on the spellcheck!!! Nobody else seems to care about it, which is REALLY annoying...Thanks for the great read! Please continue!
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Reviewed By: Fox Writer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good chapter! poor little Yugi, not a clue. and Yami has to put up with Anzu, i pity him. can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: fox writer (to lazy to log in) On: May 03, 2005 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that evil Anzu!!!! oh, update soon please! can't wait to read the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: jaq On: April 30, 2005 04:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting good! Update more soon please.
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Reviewed By: Fox Writer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good! can't wait for you to update!
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Reviewed By: Fox Writer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chapter, once again! revise the next one and write more please!
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Reviewed By: Fox Writer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story!
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Reviewed By: Fox Writer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really great story! please revise more and such!
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Reviewed By: Sailor InuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 16:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
I see you haven't updated this story on a loooooooooonnnggg time.. but I'm gonna ask you to update soon anyway. I hope you haven't abandoned this story because it's really good and I want to read more. So please try to update soon, okay?
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Title: =/
Reviewed By: S&S On: July 06, 2004 09:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
suboi:your eeeevvvviiiilllll not updating.....i agree with christen =/ \sakura :not as evil as me....no 1 can be......it'll be imposible!!!oh hurry and update so ill be the evilest in the world!!!MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHa.....
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Title: fergot
Reviewed By: SnS On: May 03, 2004 08:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
/suboi:well nice suspense anyway....try yugi hurt himself tis time .... or yami broke up wif him or..... \sakura:BAKURA HELPS HIM!!!/suboi: sorri bout er... anyway mebe seto comes in pic n helps yugi n bakura helps yami....\sakura: yugi learns 2 fight n gets haunted yami save him /suboi:sorri again she jus watch snow queen so tats our....\sakura:IDEAS!!!!/\together:byby!!!UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: givin ideas
Reviewed By: SnS On: May 03, 2004 08:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
/suboi:wowe...o god tis is sooooo gd ^.~ \sakura: yea rite its fabuless.... err....great!!/suboi:hurry n update
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Title: well....
Reviewed By: huh??? On: March 16, 2004 05:40 CST
Comment/Review:
upydatey..... uuuummmm..... wheres marik n malik????? well......hurry n upydatey
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Reviewed By: kristen89 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is really evil to stop writing there! Please write more! i have to know if yugi dies and why he is getting the same cuts as Yami. PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! BTW, can you make the chapters a but longer? Thanks.
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