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Title: Those Cookies!
Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, it might be way past V-Day, but who doesn't like cookies like that? And the guys' reactions to them?? SO much fun!!! I like Fuji's character! And Sess's reaction to Kagome eating the cookie - that's unusual for Mr. Cool! I still want Inuyasha and Kagome together, but with Kikyo nice, it's kind of hard for that! Maybe a one-nighter and then Inuyasha realizes how much he cares for Kagome? Hmmm....but where would that put Sesshomaru-sama?? I know a lot of people want those two together....I know, I'm just a Inuyasha/Kagome fan! ^_^ Or maybe they spend the night together, Inuyasha realizes how much he really likes her, but then Sess moves in and Inuyasha is beating himself up knowing he made the wrong choice???? I've been similar to where Kagome is, so that's another reason I'm rooting for her and Inuyasha in this one.....well I guess we'll just see what happens! ^_^ Sara-sama
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Reviewed By: EvilBunny. On: March 07, 2004 23:30 CST
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I just had to let you know that I'm loving this story. I'm also glad to here that some people's college experiances were as varied as mine. When I was still living in the dorms we had these wonderfully explicit ice cube trays...and many posed the question "Why is there a penis in my drink?".
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Title: o_O
Reviewed By: chevere who is too lazy to sign in On: February 25, 2004 15:45 CST
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valentines what?? lol! you remind me so much of my dear cousin... my votes remain the same. Maybe I'd vote for Fuji/Kag again (if that is possible) and... oh! btw, you're american, right? what do you think of this new issue with homosexuality and marriages and law? I think maybe I've lived too long here in Holland but the thought of being against it sounds to me so stuuuuupid...
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Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 01:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter - and I guess you can count me as the one vote for Inuyasha/Kagome! ^_^ I like how you have traditional *right?* Japanese concerns from Kagome's mother, but that Kagome wants to be her own person! Keep up the good work! And who's to say Inuyasha can't dump Kikyo and hook up with Kagome??? Sara-sama
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Reviewed By: MainOracle On: February 23, 2004 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it's the sweet truth you are twisting the plot around. Now what you have another character in the story. Who was it again...Ratri? I think you could make this a great fic if you didn't mix everything up so much. Personally I can't see Kagome as a lesbian so I vote Sess/kag.
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Reviewed By: gothichotaru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 11:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!!!!!! I vote for a Kag/Ses/Fuji love story
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Reviewed By: yeehah On: February 22, 2004 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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whew. . .this is the first chapter that i've fallowed completely! i feel smart^_^ anyway, i cant wait for the nar/kag scene! i really like the relationships/friends and what not; i cant explain why exactly, but i think their cool. keep up the updating!(BTW im paige89)
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 19:36 CST
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Porn cookies... should definately be present!! I am still saying S/K/F!! Whooo! LOL. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 15:31 CST
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hahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahha... . oh ya, i still say kag/sessh. update soon! arianna
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Reviewed By: Melshenia On: February 15, 2004 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story...keep up the good writing...i vote for the Sess/Kag/Fugi triangle...can't wait for the next chapter...update soon...the story is really funny Melshenia Kari Email: Melsheniakari@yahoo.com
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Title: Whoa
Reviewed By: eMeLyNoOoPeE [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 06:24 CST
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i so think it should be a sesshoumaru and a kagome...those to rock in this one... and kagome and sesshoumaru should have more sex... alot more sex... hahaha j/k... and naraku should get his ass beat... haha...ooo yeah and kagome should sleep with fuji too... make them bi... man i should get to sleep i am delirious right now tah tah
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Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: February 13, 2004 14:41 CST
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What? Sesshou/Kagome isn't interesting enough for you? Lol, well okay, how about spicing things up with a Sess/Kag/Fuji triangle? Of course I still want Sesshou to end up with Kagome, but it would be interesting to have Fuji as the main competitor for her heart. Isn't that funny? Sesshou's 'rival' is a girl! [Note: I said that I STILL want this to end up as SESS/KAG. That's just my secondary vote/pairing...er, sort of. I like Fuji ^_^]
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Reviewed By: Launa29968 On: February 13, 2004 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the first chapter and that's all I can give you credit for. From there it all went downhill. You made up too many OC's and you're twisting the plot around. Your chapters have no actual subjects, you just put whatever comes to your mind in them. If Fuji was going to be your main character in the story then don't try and base it around Kagome. That's all I really have to say.
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Reviewed By: tabbykat On: February 13, 2004 08:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!!!!!! I also vote for Sess/Kag/Fuji thanks!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 12:55 CST
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Well I'll start of by saying you are an ecellent writer. I liked the way you keep your story moving. Nothing is under or over done. And this story is what one would call "well rounded". But there are a little to many characters for me to remember. You seem to descibe everyone really well and understand/express concepts that most people don't. While I can't say that I will be waiting for your next chapter, I will say that if I see it I will read it. Sorry I'm not very partical to Sesshomaru/Kagome pairings. I like that classic InuYasha/Kagome one.
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