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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 03:32 CDT
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Oh! Naughty Honda! Reading Otogi's poem without permission! Heh. Now, how's he going to tell Otogi that the feeling's are mutual, ne? Will he just come out and tell him? Or beat around the bush? Hm... Oh! I love the arrangement between Kaiba and Jou. Hm? Rockmelon?! I've never had that before! I've never even heard of that before! Please hold while I go look it up in google... Oh!!! We call those cantaloupes here in the US! Now I know what you're talking about! Yeah, those things are good! Oh! Can't wait for the next chapter! I wanna see more Ryou and Malik action! Ryou was high-larious! So random! "The rapest" part was my favorite! Heh. He's so cute! And the differences between Malik and Marik were amusing too! Character thoughts are greatsome! Heh. Tell me when you update (my email's dead so tell me in a review to my fic, or send a message to RyokoMink@yahoo.com and I'll find out through RyokoMink) and I'll come and review the chapter! I just got back from a four day road trip accross three states. Damned, I'm tired! So ja ne! And keep the cool story line coming! It's awesome!
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Reviewed By: Cleverkitty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was COOL! Arabic and Anchient Egyptian are two completely different languages.
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Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 19:49 CDT
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Reviewed By: Oichijouji [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 23:33 CDT
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I'm reviewing!!!! *dances for joy* Aren't you proud of me. Good chapter...but I still can't believe you turned this into a Seto/Jou fic (seriously, that took me by complete surprise...even though it was chapters ago) Looking forward to the next chap..and if you don't write it....i'll kill ya!! Love ya Rin
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Reviewed By: The Almighty Elena On: June 22, 2004 10:36 CDT
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haw! i knew this would somehow become a jou and kaiba fic! im soooooooooo smart! ^_^ **didnt actually know, im just saying that to sound smart.** update soon!
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 22:51 CDT
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Yay! It's turning shonen ai! Whoo! Although, it is going rather fast, but I like! I like! Ah, yes. This is my second favorite couple. First is, and shall forever be Bakura and Ryou. Hey? Is Ryou and Malik and item in here? I get that distinct feeling that they are... *shrugs* Hm? What? Update my fic? Um... OK. I shall! And really, I'm literally twiching to see how this fic turns out!
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Reviewed By: Avvy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 22:18 CDT
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Great chapter, really. I knew this would turn out to be Seto x Jou, haha. Funny how my mind works..
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Reviewed By: The Almighty Elena On: April 05, 2004 15:08 CDT
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i was wonderin wat would become of jou.....^_^ GROOVY!
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angel_2891 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 15:48 CST
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oooo!poor jou!T.T plz more
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Reviewed By: Avvy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 23:41 CST
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Ehh, after I kept reading I really didn't like Bell. This chapter was awesmely sad, and wonderful. Keep it up!
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 21:53 CST
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That was such a... Sweet chapter! *sniff*sniff* And Kaiba was actually... Aww.. It's so sad! *bawl* But the fic is so awesome so far! Please don't stop writing! This really is good! I can't wait to see how you make it turn out!
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Title: Holy Hell and CRAP and back!
Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 01:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Talk about TWISTED unexpected Endings! I literaly shouted, "NO!!!" at the same time as Jounouchi! Oh, my various gods, /that/ was something I did /not/ see coming!! I... I still can't get over it! My.. My heart is still pounding! Oh, my! Oh, no! What will become of Jou!?! Poor him! He'll probably blame himself! Oh, poor boy! ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ............ But.... Now... He's free... To... *awkward pause* Go out with Kaiba? *shrugs and scratches head* I seriously have /no/ idea were you're going with this fic. Anything can happen now, heh. And I LOVE it! Please, oh, please, for the sake of all that a fanfic writer holds dear and true, continue this fic!!! It's beyond awesome!
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Reviewed By: Avvy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 04:19 CST
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o.o I didn't like Bell anyways.. But I sure do feel bad for poor Jou... Can't wait for the next chappie! (And yea, I do like Malik, he's one of my favs.)
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Reviewed By: Kaita the Lag Demon On: February 28, 2004 13:50 CST
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Hey! I really love this. This is the first fic I read by you, but i'll read the other ones soon too ;) cant wait until the next chappie =} keep it up =D
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Reviewed By: Avvy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 23:53 CST
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*Is reviewing chapter 6 (or whatever the newest chapter is, lol)* Yaaaaaaaaaaeeeeyyy! Malik is in this fic! *Glomps Malik* Once again, great chappie and I can't wait for the next!
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