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Title: i like it
Reviewed By: ...........no...........one...... On: April 27, 2004 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it keep going
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Reviewed By: Amber Wolf On: April 25, 2004 13:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey we love your story please update soon i really wanna see what happens is kikyo really upset or is she jus trying to ruin Yashas life cause he couldnt save her blah
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Reviewed By: QTpie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 03:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let's just say i'm addicted to this story. Anxiously awaits next chapter so update asap please!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Inu though, can't say he didn't deserve it, i'm suprised you have Kagome still talking to him. Anyways, just curious if Kagome is all healed up from her late night encounter with the snake youkai considering she was the tug-of-war between Inu and Sango in the last chap? Wasn't sure if she healed that rapidly.
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Title: sweet!
Reviewed By: Crazy-Ass Elf On: April 06, 2004 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! i totally love this! it's so original. i can't wait to see what happens. update soon! i'll be watchin ^_^
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Title: *sniff*
Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!!!! Please oh please oh PLEASE!!!!! *waaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!* I need MORE and I need it NOW!!!!
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Reviewed By: BlueMist [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic! It's my all time favorite. I hope you update soon..can't wait to see what happens! keep up the great work*
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Reviewed By: Amber Wolf On: March 21, 2004 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hay this story is great I am thoroughly enjoying it well except the Kikyo factor but Ive always hated her anyways keep up the good work and please update soon
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Title: Sutashii
Reviewed By: Sutashii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this your doing a great job!!!
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Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 17:43 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!! PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (not signed on) On: March 07, 2004 02:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!!! great chapter. Inuyasha HOW Could you do that too kagome!! *cries hysterically* please update soon. i love ur story and cannot wait for the next chapter. poor poor Inuyasha and Kagome.. keep up the good work. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (not signed in) On: March 03, 2004 01:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pooor Inuyasha! wow.. i almost cried. it was soo sad.. Kikyo should be murdered... *grins evilly* well keep up the good work and update soon please. pretty pretty please...Krystal.
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Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 21:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey! Great story! I am up to chapter 7 and will read the rest tomorrow (I have to do homework!) Bye and I'll be sure to review again!
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Title: annoyomous
Reviewed By: annoyomous On: February 24, 2004 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me want UPDATE NOW!!! "chanting" update update UPDATE
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Title: holy ......
Reviewed By: eViL kAgOmE [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 04:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u just had to have kikyo there didnt u?? i hate her so much right now!! how could u do this to poor kagome. if i was u i would make this a tragic story. get kagome kidnapped in the middle of her speech and then have inu find out to late. by the time he goes to get kagome she is already working for naraku and tries to kill him but in the end she cant so she kills herself in front of inu. after she dies inu realizes his true feelings for kagome but its to late. so he holds her dead body close to him and cries for his lost and untold love........ well if u actually want to write something like that just email me and ill give u the rest of the idea but u still pissed me off with kikyo!!!!
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Reviewed By: Julia Fletcher On: February 08, 2004 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I usually read this story on FF.net (I'm Julia: It's all a dream there), but you don't have enough reviews on this site, and I love this story. I rated lower for the grammar and style mostly because of the mistakes in the newest chapter, it just needs editing. You're an incredible writer, exceptional at angst, and immensely entertaining. Every emotion you try to convey I feel through how you choose to illustrate a scene. And though this story is similar to other AU's I've read, it surpasses most. Like I said, I love it. As far as the newest plot development, just please (this is, of course, just my request) don't let Kagome forgive him easily. Especially after everything with Hojou. She would realistically lose trust in Inuyasha, and I totally understand the situation with Kikyou (VERY similar to the series, with the guilt), but it's no excuse for taking Kagome for granted, you know? Just my two cents. I await anxiously for the next installment. Thanks for writing this! ~ Julia P.S. I'll review your other story later, I promise (the one where Kagome and Inuyasha are married). I really like it, except for I want to beat Inuyasha over the head after that last chapter ;)
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