Title: Ummmm... well.....
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 12:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, umm...... you wrote your story into your summary! BTW: Please fix up your spacings.... other than that, not bad.. I think that you could probably use a beta reader, just so that he/she could catch any mistakes and make your story better by giving you some constructive criticism. You could post a notice asking for a beta reader on one of your chapters, or just post an author's notice. Also, this is not a flame, because I would NEVER flame anybody's hard work. I know that it does take a lot of effort to write fanfics, and get many reviews(sadly, I don't have a lot of reviews). well, good luck to you! Keep it going because I can see some interesting possibilities with this fanfiction. Tanya-- wishing youa Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! ^^
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