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Reviewed By: Itsukami Urokum [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 14:41 CDT
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SO KAWAII! ^__________________________________^ i love kid stories ^__~
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the epilouge!!! You must write epilouge 2 and fast!!! This is one of my favorite fics ever!!! I can also tell you I have started a fic of my own called An Unlikely Adventure. It's an Inuyasha and Angelic Layer crossover. Raimei: And of course I am the main character. Koga: Shut up! Raimei: ::slaps Koga:: I'LL KICK YOUR ASS AGAIN IF YOU DON'T QUIT BOTHERING ME!!! Kagome: Calm down Rai. Inuyasha: You should quite right now. They won't stop fighting.
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Title: tiger_gurl says
Reviewed By: tiger_gurl On: April 22, 2004 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a cute little story. Even though I only on chapter ten. I think you need to get someone to proof read your work before you load it. That's why I gave you a 6 on the spelling and grammar part.
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Reviewed By: Ryunosuke-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 08:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that i have enjoyed this fic since the begining and am happy to hear that it will be continued. Perhaps somewhare in there Sesshomaru will get his arm back.
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Reviewed By: money_chick On: April 08, 2004 19:51 CDT
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Cool chapter. I really diggin' this story.
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Reviewed By: DemonStargirl On: April 04, 2004 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story gets better and better.I love it!
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Reviewed By: Mickey mouse_chick On: April 04, 2004 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. I can't stop laughing. This story very funny.
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Reviewed By: DemonStargirl On: April 04, 2004 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great chapter. and totally hilarious.
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Title: Cool story
Reviewed By: Karia On: April 02, 2004 21:19 CST
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I really really I liked it.
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Reviewed By: Kyung On: March 31, 2004 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thank You for updating! I don't like suspense.
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Reviewed By: Tk On: February 21, 2004 04:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool story. I luv the changes in the relationships and their not OOC.
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Reviewed By: nonschool On: February 20, 2004 05:15 CST
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great funny little fic;keep on hope the muse gets you.
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Reviewed By: Tiger_gurl On: February 10, 2004 20:07 CST
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Great story! I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Ryunosuke-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying your story very much. I like the way you have expressed the relationship between Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. I hope you get around to updating in the near future. As long as you keep writting and updating I will keep on reviewing.
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Reviewed By: avi17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I absolutely LOVE this fic!!! PLEASE try to get the next chapter up soon (puppy face) Oh, and no offense about the 5 in spelling and grammar caregory, but I've been a grammar police my whole life...(such as it's "youkai",not "youkia") Aside from that, I adore this story! Keep up the good work!!!
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