"Love for eternity" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: ~Frost~bite~ On: January 13, 2004 19:12 CST Comment/Review: alrighty then. when i was reading this i felt like it was fast forward on my cd player. basicly i felt like it was rushed. it was good though just a little to fast.
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Reviewed By: Hazel/inuyashagirl On: January 04, 2004 12:58 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: You write A little to short and you dont have very good detail but I loved the story:)
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Reviewed By: Princess Rin On: December 26, 2003 20:41 CST Comment/Review: EEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWW! Ix-nay on the enis-pay!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashaluver29 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2003 18:58 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Nice story, I like reading Inuyasha and Kagome stories. This one was really good!
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Reviewed By: ~Frost~bite~ On: December 25, 2003 14:15 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review: you should put more detail. have it go slower and last longer. you went to fast with the story.
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Reviewed By: teacher On: December 25, 2003 01:11 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review: This should have been a one shot fan fic. There's no story here - as in a plot. The characters are extremely OCC. The grammer and sentence structure could be better. Next time, expand more into detail of the surroundings, what's going on away from the main characters, and make details your primary goal. Pull the reader *into* your story.
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Title: lovin it Reviewed By: bellarina06 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 13:44 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved it
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