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Reviewed By: Too Lazy to sign in - KitsuneLover On: February 11, 2004 23:32 CST
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That was great, You gotta keep updating. Hope your writer's block ends soon
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Reviewed By: Yami Yue [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 21:30 CST
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I love this story! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: katy123 On: February 07, 2004 21:04 CST
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That was good!! I can;t wait till Heii finds them!! I hate writers block!! But i must confess i have it also!!It bad i tell you!! Ok bye now good luck on getting rid of it!
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Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! Hoshi here! heehee... I only read the first chapter, it is REALLY good! I am so tired right now though, so I thought I should review now and review tomorrow too. You know what? I am so glad there are still some GOOD authors around. I am tired of the 1000 different anime cross overs and stupid made up characters being the main characters and ext... This was a really good opening, I know I'm hooked ^.^ I shall continue reading now, Bye-Chu for now! P.S. Guess what???? My mom is letting my put my stories back! YAYAYAY!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 22:37 CST
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I'll be completely honest here, I like the basic plotline. I think it's interesting. However, your events are not thought through very well. For example, Kurama has the power to force his way out of that cave, and, if he really, really wanted to, our of the camp. Rahne may have Hiei's powers, but there is no way that she would be able to use them in such a controlled way at that young of an age, without any training, and never having used them before. Keep it up because I can't wait until the end, but put a little more thought into it, please.
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING!! I CAN'T TO READ THE REST!!!! Good Luck on getting over your writer's block! ^_^
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 04:49 CST
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Great job!!!I hope you get over your writers block soon!
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Title: DON'T LEAVE US HANGIN'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 03:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter hope you update soon I always check whether you do because, YOU JUST CAN'T LEAVE US ALL HIGH AND DRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sincerely, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 23:29 CST
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That was great! Please keep updating soon
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 01:53 CST
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I'll tell you straight up that this whole thing isn't written very well. However, I like the plot and am interested in seeing how this ends. Keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 05:51 CST
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That was cool!! Great job!! I love this story!!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 23:31 CST
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That was cool!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 17:45 CST
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That was great! You have to keep writing quickly. Please update soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Katy123 On: January 26, 2004 22:09 CST
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Nope me no hate!! Me begging for more real soon though!! Me want to knowe what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: Angelfox700+ On: January 25, 2004 14:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A little disturbing but cool and I will not use flames
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