| "Past Pain, Present Love" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Melshenia On: January 23, 2004 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*mouth hangs open* i am so confused. ok here is a suggestion, you need to take the story a little slower and give more information. oh and can you make the chapters longer. other than that i really like the story, it was just a little confusing. keep up the good writing, and i can't wait till you next update. Melshenia Kari Email: Melsheniakari@aol.com
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Reviewed By: Mistriss [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 15:06 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG! update like NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plz plz plz!!!!! make it a kagome/hiei fic plz!
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Reviewed By: Infinite Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 08:58 CST
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your story is good, I like it alot, but if you could not interupt in the middle of sentences and stuff it woud be very very very very good.
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Title: I like
Reviewed By: AyealisKomori(Bat) ^^ On: January 15, 2004 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really like dah story...i really think you should write more really soon ^-^
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 00:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the interesting work. Like the story!! Want to see more of it.
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Reviewed By: Daneru On: January 10, 2004 11:21 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE,UPDATE, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i MUST know more!!!!!
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Title: past pain/present plesure
Reviewed By: Daneru On: January 10, 2004 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
style of writing:7 because its easy to follow and you keep a reader interested but you sometimes cut in at inconvinient places and break the flow of the story. i like the way you translate the japanese words into english as the story goes :3! Spelling/grammer: there were some misspelled words example, here was supposed to be her. but you did great with spelling! originality: so far your story follows the heart break b/c inu whent for kikyo line but so far im not boared to death b/c ive heard this story time MILLIONS of times in the past! great job on keeping a reader iterested suchi! Enjoyment: i LOVE reading your story!! im so glad youve got your works out there on the internet! just like you wanted, im proud of you! you deserve a 10+ overall rateing
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Reviewed By: Mistriss [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 19:13 CST
Comment/Review:
i like the update! who found Kagome! did u enjoy the nice long flashback?! anyway i hope that u update the fic soon! plz
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Reviewed By: Julitica [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: nightmareofcat
Reviewed By: nightmareofcat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 22:24 CST
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so much action my head is a spinnin @_@ lol well anyway i loved the story
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Reviewed By: PJ On: January 02, 2004 20:06 CST
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This sounds interesting I am an Inu/Kagome fan but do read others once in a while if they are good. This one sounds good post more soon please
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Reviewed By: Firetiger34 On: January 02, 2004 18:19 CST
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your story is good. update soon I wanna know who grabbed her. Oh and I love you in japanese is Ai shiteru
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Title: i am reading!
Reviewed By: rosie13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 15:35 CST
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see i red ur fic! ur even on my fav list! Feel loved now? heehheee newayz, good job. yay sess to the rescue!!! i luv this story. keep it coming!!!! ~Rosie13~
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Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a great start! Just make sure Inuyasha gets swallowed by Kurama's Death Tree and Hiei SLOWLY kills Kikyo! I vote for Kagome/Kurama and Sango/Hiei pairings!! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Mistriss [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 15:47 CST
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continue! p[lz update! I hope that inuyasha and kikyo go to hell together! (I reallyhate Kikyo) if we get to choose the pairings i hope that its a Kag/Hiei fic! plz update soon! even if it isn't i'll still read the fic anyway
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