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Title: the sequel
Reviewed By: Playwrite_Chailyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 01:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ glad I could help you come up with a piece of the sequel, I hope you have fun writing it, 'cause I know I'm going to have fun reading it! I loved the ending to this, or should I say the beginning to another era of their lives? lol any ways, I can't wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: Himeno [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yes ma'am please, please continue, they could always have a long distance relationship, ah true love knows no bounds ! thank you for the very nice read.
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Title: Awaikage
Reviewed By: Za Reiken On: January 05, 2004 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool wish I had read it sooner. It was good Yume all your stories are very good actualy. Sorry though I am not to good with this kind of thing so no suggestions. Awaikage Za Reiken P.S. Oh yeah you should definetly continue it if you can think how. P.P.S. But still that does make a good ending to.;)
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Reviewed By: Uohana On: January 04, 2004 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you have something going here! I think that you should continue. Like make it where it's been 3 years of where they haven't seen eachother, and like they finally meet up. Kagome would be out of school and sessy could be doing whatever. You could make it to where they have to re-make their highschool love that ended so soon. I think that would be good. Anyway I liked your story I hope you continue. And thank you for taking the time to do that! Hehe^-^
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Reviewed By: Shayril [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this and all of your stories. You are an excellent writer. Your ideas are original and brilliantly put together. I look forward to reading more of your work. As for this story in specific. I think it would be a wonderful idea for you to write at least one more installment where Sesshoumaru and Kagome are reunited after she moves away.
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 13:12 CST
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Love the story ... but yeah, add an epilogue at least to this one. Then maybe a sequel? That's up to you ^_~ but definitely a bad place to end this one. Terminally cute mind you, but still ... ^_^
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Title: *sobs*
Reviewed By: Namiko On: January 01, 2004 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so....so beautiful...*sniffles*..so sad...and CF was right...that was a terrible place to end!!! You should erm...i dunno continue it to where she leaves and then have a one-shot like sequel when she returns to Sesshoumaru's waiting arms??...*sobs* I dunno...that was somewhat my idea...but yeah...you diffenently should continue the fic ...................or else...... dun dun dun i dunno what i'm gonna do but its gonna be REAL bad!!! ~.~;; Bai Bai! ~Nami-chan
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD! That was GREAT. One of the best stories here on mediaminer. YOU BETTER MAKE A CONTINUATION! What sort of sick-minded freak are you leaving the story where you did. You didn't even warn me to get a tissue box. I was in tears. *sniffs* Like I said please make a continuation. I abosolutely love all your stories here on mediaminer. I'm waiting for you to update the Beauty and the Beast one -_-(actually it's just based on beauty and the beast) but the point is you need to update.
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Reviewed By: B.W. authoress On: January 01, 2004 10:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS STORIE! YOU MUST MUST MUST MUST!(writing this reminds me of a book called:'Are you there God? its me ----'(idontfreaken remember) anyways, as i was saying you MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST CONTINUE THE STORIE...EITHER THAT OR WRITE A NEW ONE.HAPPY NEWYEAR!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ -WIDOW
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Reviewed By: iram (wackoramaco87) On: January 01, 2004 10:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED THIS "one shot!" it was soo sweet! WAIII!!! plz plz plz you HAVE to continue!!! lol!a suggestion i have is: you could always do the cliche ending and having her job in tokyo suddenly become permenant or since sess said he's wait for her and i'm assuming that she'd wait for him you could do something with that promise! ^____^ i really hope you continue! HAPPY NEW YEAR YAAR!!!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 03:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really, really, really hope you continue this story!!! it was great, i really liked it. did you have to finish it like that, is was so sad!!!! not far, I want more chappies!!!! i really do hope you continue…bye! =^-^= W.T.P.
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Reviewed By: Fenikkusu Ice (not logged on) On: January 01, 2004 00:13 CST
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Arrgghh! Why didja end it there? Yep I think this fic should be continued. Just a suggestion, may be they could ran into each other about 5 years later. May be have them running into each other in a simple place where they do not expect to meet again... like a coffee shop or something. Have them accidentally spill coffee on each other or something. Anyway you're the author so it's your decision. ^_^
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Playwrite_Chailyn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this, I only ask that you continue it, I've read your other works but never had enough time to write a review to them. If you need some suggestions, why not jump in time to Kagome entering college at Tokyo U, and Sesshoumaru is all ready there. They meet, but yet complications arise when Kagome has other suitors calling on her. or Sesshoumaru is bethrolled for some reason. **shrug** just some ideas I had, I'm lucky to get time to write, so I'll throw out ideas to whomever asks. good luck and keep writing! ^_^
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! This is great! Koga tied up, Miroku and Sango, and best of all, Kagome and Sesshoumaru. but *sigh* she has to move. Maybe you should have an epilouge. Yume, again, a great fic, simple yet very good. Happy New Year! *blows little horn*
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Reviewed By: Mistress Fluffy(not signed in) On: December 31, 2003 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
{::holds an apple::} So ... I hope you continue this. Because well, {::lookes at apple then you::} I don't think that an apple would feel to good beign thrown at. {::Throws apple away turns smiling::} It was great, just gomen about not reviewing the last to chapters! Agh but I really hope that you continue. Oh and tell hi to CF for me!
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