| "Ranma in the Pokegirl World" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] |
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Title: an author
Reviewed By: Nameless Author [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 12:04 CDT
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i have to say something about this fic. frankly the story is good but adding characters from other anime IS BAD, because the title of the fic is RANMA IN THE POKEGIRL WORLD. not i repeat not EVA IN THE POKEGIRL WORLD or SHINJI IN THE POKEGIRL WORLD. again i am stating this because it started out good with just ranma, then you had to add other characters. no offense but frankly a story that is supposed to be focused on ranma then adding others who have nothing to do with ranma until they meet up is pretty much annoying. also you are putting more emphasis on shinji and the eva crew than on ranma and cloud and THEIR adventure. again i think you really fubared with this fic by adding elements that don't belong. sorry but this is what i think.
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Reviewed By: dennisud2015 On: May 03, 2004 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks WW, Rei maybe a cool and stoic girl, but I think you haven't scratched the surface here, in taming or in actually working a pokegirl fight WITH Asuka. I mean Imagine how will a Pokegirl deal with a fire AND Ice attack! Oh and Shinji better keep his vitamins up as I'm sure Fuwa-fuwa will be a catalyst of sorts as well with his trio of Pokegirls! Wonder who his alpha will be! Nice job BTW! dennisud
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Reviewed By: dennisud2015 On: April 24, 2004 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF???? You killed Rei???? Oh come on making them PokeGirls was ok but Bumping her off was a big jip! Now ... if she somehow returns in some way, well then that will be ok. So far a very entertaining ficcy, other than Rei dying! dennisud
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Title: Crappy, Crappy, Crappy
Reviewed By: The Critic On: April 22, 2004 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic should be called "Ranma": The Hands of Fate. If you don't know what I'm talking about than look up reviews for "Manos": the Hands of Fate and you'll see what I mean.
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Reviewed By: RagnaBlade On: April 22, 2004 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uhm...not rag on you or anything but the more crossover characters you had the more confusing this is gonna get. Bad enough you brought the Eva pilots and baka-Shinji (READ SPINLESS WHIMP!.)But then again that is what most people do in these kinds of fanfictions (pokegirls fanfiction). The adding of an original character was a good move. Most people tend to use analouges of other anime characters so a little originaity is a welcome change. I really enjoyed reading this story, but I do have one question for you...is there a real Blood Gift called Adaption? I went over the list at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ThePokegirlWorld, and I did not see it listed there at all. Did you make that one up?
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: DJ On: April 18, 2004 03:04 CDT
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I noticed that when I look at the chapters title listings on the pull down menu it has all of the chapters as having the same date. Did you add something to all the chapters? Maybe Cloud can give some healing milk to Rei? Or maybe Shinji can bring Rei back to life (given that he was somehow involved in bringing Asuka from a state of digested hamburger back to life in canon). Since Shinji already has a Boobcat and probably will get Asuka and Rei (assuming she pulls through), it will probably make it more balanced if the demoness should go to Ranma (Shinji would probably prefer to strangle the demoness anyhow). It would probably also give Ranma a power up from his "blood gift" to give him something with defense and offense.
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Reviewed By: Arsenal IMS On: April 16, 2004 12:30 CDT
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No offense but I'm a little disapointed with chapter 6. I read your stories for the sex mostly not the action scenes. This chapter while it did discus sex had none in it.
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Reviewed By: An Idiot On: April 16, 2004 11:32 CDT
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I'm not really sure that Rei is dead. After all, you're the author and would know. That and you asking if she was really dead gives me the feeling that she isn't. Now if Asuka is humping the log, that has yet to be revealed. Though, she probably isn't, otherwise the noises wouldn't be an angry voice, but sounds of pleasure. But, will you ever give Ranma another pokegirl?
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Reviewed By: Grand_Crusader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 10:51 CDT
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Well, well, well, another chapter to "Ranma in the Pokegirl World". For your first combat scene, you've done pretty damned well for yourself. Could we maybe see some updates for your other stories too?
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Reviewed By: mike11 On: April 10, 2004 09:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, keep writing like this and I might become a obessive fanboy for your fanfics. The concept is interesting and the stories flows as smoothly as ketchup from a bottle or milk from a milktit's breast. Sorry for not being able to critique anything but I can find no fault in it. I hope you continue to enjoy writing this.
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Reviewed By: Of the street On: April 08, 2004 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well considering the rules that were listed earlier in the story, whoever tames Rei and Asuka 1st will be the permanant Tamer. By the tone that you have already set it seems as if Shinji is the unoffical Tamer so if you go a Ramna route then he has to go after Shinji. I never know what to do with you as far as reviews go. I would like to see another chapter of this, but I hope you don't make Shinji a super tamer too because that role seems to be held by Ramna. Balancing the character's personality is going to be a central thing for me because I hate Superman complexes. I think that you have done that so far.
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Reviewed By: amber,fg On: April 06, 2004 02:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really really creative and original! it's not only porn, it has a cute plot! ^_^ well done! real nice!
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Reviewed By: ZAROK On: April 05, 2004 15:33 CDT
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This was great I can't wait for later chapters.
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Reviewed By: Nui On: March 25, 2004 17:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Great funny story.
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Title: Ranma in the Pokegirl World
Reviewed By: Masderin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry bout not telling you how great this fic is. I like the precept and how everything is happening, especially now that Ranma is 'fixed'. And I hope your leaning towards Rei joining with Ranma. Please continue it.
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