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| "Healing the Silver Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 ] | Title: ace,kagomes cousin
Reviewed By: se On: December 31, 2003 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiei/kagome.please.hey kagome meets her cuz-n ace,yuskes lil sis.ace,a street fighter,dancer,thief,good lier,and works as an automahanic,bar tender(the best),rapper/singer,and races on the streets,meets her brother,mother,and her cuz-n kagome.later,kuwabara says he can beat ace,but is proven wrong wen ace is matrial arts figther.she tells them her story on how her father trained her and has a weapon given by her father.the weapon is a blade disk that can cut any thing in its path,just watch jacie chan aventures and u'll know.her powers r-fire and lighting.and she has a garage full of cars(4rom 2 fast 2 furious beginging).yuske,and ace get to know each other and the gang.on the way home 4rom her friends 10,king,kween,jack,prince,princess,and the jokers hang out club where all demons go "THE PLAYER'S CLUB",50 demons attack her.koenma shows yuske and others but tell s them to watch wut she can do,and wat they saw shocked them all,she burntand shocked them.they saw a fire lighting ball in her palm.ace wears-mondae:bandana,baggy dark blue pants,jacket,and bikini top,tuesdae:her skool uniform that is short skirt red,platform shirt,high heels,long black hair down showing brownish-gold streaks,dark blue eyes,wensdae:short jersy dress,says #1 player on front and pimp on bac,hair curled,wearing white high heel boots,a necklace that spins(on 50 cent video p.i.m.p.)says g-unit,no sleeve,and a viser says "ROYALTee OF G-UNIT",color of clothes is red,thursdae:blue skirt,white high heel boots,blue top no strape,white jacket,hair curled and some start,wearing a hat that says "#1 stunner",fridae:white suit(on aaliahs video,more then a woman),white boots to match,and shades(glasses)so pairs are hiei/kagome,kur/ace,yuske/keiko
| Reviewed By: Gin Aibu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 13:56 CST
Comment/Review:
This fanfic is good. It's a little dark now, when will it lighten up a bit? Anyway i vote for Hiei/Kag because it would be funny if they constantly kept throwing insults at each other, like Kagome and Inuyasha or Sango and Miroku. It would slightly lightne the atmosphere. With Kurama or Sesshoumaru it would be sweet, but not as amusing so i vote for Hiei/Kagome. Plz update soon.
| Title: night fox
Reviewed By: nightfox_5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 09:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story so far. as for the pairing i choose kur/kag
| Reviewed By: JRee On: December 31, 2003 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've created an amazing story and I can not wait to read more! Either Kag/Hiei or Kag/Sess would be fine with me.
| Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed on) On: December 30, 2003 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good so far and just for the vote Hiei/Kagome Please. AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
| Reviewed By: jocie On: December 29, 2003 00:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update and hurry
| Reviewed By: Dark Elf On: December 28, 2003 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it so far, would you please make it a Kagome and Hiei one. There aren't many out there, and I really like them.
| Title: Dark Demonic Moon Wolf
Reviewed By: Dark Demonic Moon Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a great fic so far! Kag/Hiei plz!!!!
| Reviewed By: Ayame X23 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 20:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Hiei/Kag PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: HEAVEN OR HELL On: December 28, 2003 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAYY priety good keep it up k oh me and my sister thinks this should be a sess/kag fic ME:Sess/KAG HEHE *BIG SMILE* SISTER:ummmm i like FLUFFY sooo i will vote for FLUFFY(sesshomaru)/Kagome ok bye ok those are my vote so keep it up
| Reviewed By: Cresent Moon 22000 On: December 28, 2003 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
SESS/KAG PLLEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE
| Reviewed By: a fan On: December 28, 2003 17:22 CST
Comment/Review:
aww i wanna know what happened ;) hurry and update!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Hiei's girl On: December 28, 2003 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it is so good plz write more make it hiei/kag plz plz
| Reviewed By: innyubabe4e [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 11:07 CST
Comment/Review:
review quickly!!! i say kur/kag or sess/kag
| Reviewed By: babymar-mar On: December 28, 2003 01:37 CST
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thats soo sad plz write mroe !!?! and i wana noe wat happend and hiei/kag plz?!?*sniff**sniff*
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