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Reviewed By: Black Rose Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 14:03 CST
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Ahh, you've updated! Great! Just one question, though. At the very end of the chapter, you had either shippou or rin (or both) say, "Yes, Momma!" I don't recal the other lords knowing that Shippou considers Kagome his mother; I thought that you would have played up Youko's or Hiei's shock, since Shippou is a full-blooded kitsune child. Just a thought. Thanks for your time. ~~BRL~~
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME update or die *evil laughter* killing ppl who dont update their work is fun BUT u dont get to read the end of the storie
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Title: Love the Story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story. Put Kagome with Kurama, if this doesn't work put her with Hiei. Update soon. Standing on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter.
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Title: Silver Ice
Reviewed By: IceYoukaiEnchantress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is good so far but chapters 3 and4 could be longer but they are great even though short!!!! PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Lady Kaela [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 19:54 CST
Comment/Review:
hey love the story and i cant wait to see what happends next so update soon ok tootles
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 18:16 CST
Comment/Review:
hey the chapter is short but really good up date soon tootles
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Reviewed By: Witch Child [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story but please make the chapters longer! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 15:52 CST
Comment/Review:
cool chapter cant wait til you update so update soon please
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Reviewed By: Mistriss [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 10:44 CST
Comment/Review:
i like the new chapter. u should have made the wolf yokia keep on insulting and had kagome pin him to a wall to prove that she was a good fighter and that it didn't matter if she was a women or not ! THIS IS ONLY A SUGGESSTION!
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 07:26 CST
Comment/Review:
cool chapter...well chapters since i just read both...AND THEY ARE BOTH GREAT!!!!!!!! i cant wait til you update and i hope its soon!!
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Title: another one!!!
Reviewed By: rosie13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 16:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes!!! I know they are probably considered cliches by now, but I just LOVE the fics where Kagome meets Yoko in the past and falls in love!!!! Will she see Kurama in the future? I hope so. Its more interestingt hat way! :) Oh yeah Updae soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: Mistriss [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 09:45 CST
Comment/Review:
i like it ! plz update soon! plz
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Reviewed By: SaiyanPrincessSesshysgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 02:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it! UPDATE, ONEGAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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