| "Foundations of Neo Genesis" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 03:54 EST
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i really like it. the sarcasm is put exactly in the right place and it is so funny! can't wait to read more. up date soon and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Spectre97 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 22:27 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is quit the interesting story you have here. plz update soon and keep up the good work.
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Title: RedHerring
Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 17:59 EST
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That was far to awesome a chapter to just leave us hanging.... Update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 14:07 EST
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love it. it's very interesting and different. can't wait to read more. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 00:55 EST
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See what happens when you spite the gods, InuYasha? You got stuck with with a ball of sunshine A.K.A. Kagome. It's just like InuYasha to skip on leaving something that might save his life later. Can't wait to see the look on his face when he sees her in the group, I'm sure he won't appreciate her right away. And I had to laugh when he compared his sins to Miroku's. That was a total inside fan joke! Sorry for those of you that didn't get it. Please say you are going to explain Sango not working for the military for a whole year. Fun? Wonder what kind of fun they are planning. I just loved the amount of thought you put into this. Even the layout and acronmins (sp?) but I am very impressed with the forethought of the ZOOS. You answered most of my questions in this chapter. Can't wait fot the next one.
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Reviewed By: Relena Omoa-o-korosu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 15:41 EST
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hey this is great. your writing is wonderful. with all the details and such. and i can't wait for chapter 3. i really really really REALLY can't!! *grinS* well ja
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Reviewed By: Relena Omoa-o-korosu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 15:41 EST
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hey this is great. your writing is wonderful. with all the details and such. and i can't wait for chapter 3. i really really really REALLY can't!! *grinS* well ja
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: January 07, 2004 21:25 EST
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cant wait for more =)
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Reviewed By: ME On: January 07, 2004 17:51 EST
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Very interesting--off to a great start--I like it!! can't wait for the next update and see how the story unfolds--great descriptions btw!! can just picture everything^_^
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 15:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its very good i hope you canupdate it soon.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 15:43 EST
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I usually prefer watching sci-fi instead of reading it because I always manage to screw up the images. But since I love your work I gave it a go. And I must say I don't think I'll have this problem here. You gave, what I would consider, realistic descriptions of Earth's future. Loved the purple moon touch. It must have been hard for Sesshomaru to cast off his only family like that. InuYasha should have at least hugged him. It will most likely be the last time they ever see each other, ever. But that is not in his character to display such affection but I guess after being accused of murder, spending half a week in jail and being abused anyone's mind would be a little off. He'll probably reflect on that moment later, correct? I liked the way you sneaked Myoga in there. Now for my hoard of questions. Will you be talking about Kikyo's murder later? InuYasha is technically rich, will this cross over towards his status while journeying? This kinda crosses over into the previous one but, Are they expected to pay for anything and if so how will InuYasha pay for it? I'll reframe from asking my other questions. And I understand if you don't answer them. Sometimes the plot can be ruined. (For other people I mean, not me.)
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Reviewed By: JC On: December 31, 2003 00:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 12:37 EST
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different but interesting =D cant wait til the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 04:19 EST
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ohh, i really like this one. i like the detail and though you seem to have put in it. i cant wait to find out more, Kagome, Sango, and Miroku are going too right? i really like this one, please don't let it go. up date soon please and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Manda On: December 29, 2003 00:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, love it.
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