| "Beautiful Symmetries" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fire of Phoenix On: April 30, 2004 01:41 CDT
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Totally ready for the sequal!^_^
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Title: Dude......
Reviewed By: Blackrose Thorn On: April 12, 2004 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude.Alpa and Omega man this is one of the gems in all of the GW fanfics I've read.Please continue to write more or my imagination is going to run wild*and there it goes*.Please by all that is good and graceous get a muse so you can write more!!!;)Tootles
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Reviewed By: Vegakitty (again) On: February 09, 2004 11:29 CST
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Vega: Well... it's never done that to my reviews before.... sorry if you can't read it. but everything in there is good ^_^
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Reviewed By: Vegakitty On: February 09, 2004 11:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vega: I'm loving this! Wufei: Of course you are! What about me?! Vega: You're enjoying it too, you lucky bastard you. *winks* Wufei: *blushes* Damn you. Vega: I really hope you continue this story. I love the interation with the rest of the characters. Quatre was great! I bet he would beat the snot out of Wufei if he was toying with Heero and Duo. Wufei: HEY! Vega: And Une. HA! That was great! Keep up the great work. And on a side note, this is quite inspiring. I should make some fanart. Wufei: Don't count on it. She's too lazy to microwave he pizza, much less draw for someone. Vega: HEY!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 19:52 CST
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Jeez, I think the boys would have been better off telling people straight away! Everyone finding out reminded me of the scene in "Grease" when Rizzo tells Sandy she's pregnant and by the time they get back to Rizzo's car, everyone knows it. OK, Quatre was kind of freaky... Is he hooked up with Trowa? So it looks like neither Heero nor Duo has to go on this mission, ne? I really love how the three of them seem to be settling into their situation.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 30, 2004 17:59 CST
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Awesome reaction from Une. Quatre's was priceless, and Sally's reaction was hilarious. Love the fic, keep up the great job. Hey write the next chapter, where Wufei's co-workers from Earth find out about Duo and Heero. Add Howard and Relena in the confusion and I bet it will be fun!
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: January 30, 2004 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovin it, keep up the good work. Chow
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Reviewed By: Lone Wolf *lol* On: January 23, 2004 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear, if you don't update within a reasonably amount of time, I will sick my imagination upon whatever it can get. God help you if you forget. On a lighter note, I LOVE THIS STORY! You couldn't guess how long I have waited for a story that I don't have to read just for the sake of the characters. I did notice that a couple of times you skipped a space between Heero's name and the next word.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 23, 2004 14:17 CST
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I agree with the old guy: 'Three lucky bastards' indeed. Keep up the awesome job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 01:29 CST
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Just to clarify, that was supposed to be the title of my review, not my name... -- MelizaMac
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Reviewed By: Those Lucky Bastards... [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 01:26 CST
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I really didn't think this fic was going to trip my trigger but I'm so glad I started reading it! You have wonderful writing skills and I love how the story has progressed so far. 1X2 is obviously my favorite pairing but the way that you've written them (in Chapter 5 especially), fits their personalities, and I think it makes sense for them not to be an item because of their "quirks" as you've described them. At the same time, as Wufei thought, they did seem to behave as if they were married... :) It's also nice to read a fic where Wufei is actually accepting affection and not continuously wallowing in low self esteem. Great work so far, kiddo; I look forward to your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: NeNa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh how sweet! Wufei definetly has his hands full now! It's great! You've done a wonderful job on this fic. Now the only question is, is if there is going to be a sequal or what? If there is then I'm all ears... er eyes? Anyway I truly enjoyed it! ~*+NeNa+*~
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Reviewed By: fire of phoenix On: January 05, 2004 05:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Coolies!^_^ Please ma'am, can I have some more?
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Reviewed By: Freak_on_a_Leash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Owari? Ohh I agree with the others...I too hope you shall add a few other chapters..that was good I loved it so much.I shall read this over and over...one of my favorites..and good luck!
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: January 01, 2004 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* that was so beautiful. Oh the sugary sweetness of it all...I LOVE YOUR STYLE MAN!!!!!
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