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| "Chrysalis" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] | Reviewed By: Pharaoh's High Priestess On: March 14, 2004 15:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! I *love* this story! It's well-written, coherent, and best of all, grammatically correct!!!I'm normally not fond of OC's, but I find myself hoping, Yugi and Yami help Yuai out...I love Yami and Yugi as a couple, but as Yami has no body, I don't mind Yuai sharing Yugi....*laughs*. I hope that disgusting Ekko gets cursed, and Yuai's parents, especially her bastard of a father dies....most painfully!Anyway, update soon! Great story telling...you've become on of my favorite authors!
| Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: jhoney [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 10:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, you have GOT to complete this soon! I'm absolutly intrigued by the storyline so far. This is splendid drama, love, hate, etc! Love it, love it, love it!
| Reviewed By: Cryptic Broken Alabaster On: March 11, 2004 21:26 CST
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Congradulations, you've won your way into the 'Crimson Moon's top 10 fanfictions' contest. Unfortunatly, being the cheap ass I am, I cannot give you any sort of reward.... But you should feel pround. It takes a lot to even get inot thoughts of this contest, let alone be accepted. You have a wonderful fiction, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.
| Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 18:26 CST
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yes, that make-up seen was good, you played their personalities perfectly! I loved it, please update again soon!
| Reviewed By: RyokoMink [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 21:19 CST
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Yay! Another chapter done and read! I thought the make up scene was pretty good. Now that that drama is over what about the shooting? Please update somemore!
| Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 17:57 CST
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kill the idiot who is black mailing Yuai! PS can she just find + steal the photos?
| Title: wondring....
Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 11:56 CST
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another chapter up, that's great.....but from your summary are you giving up on Yugi and Yuai being a couple? ....Please say it isn't so, I'd feel bad for Yuai then.
| Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 04:08 CST
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Oh, I loved the make-up scene! All the little details were perfect! Absolutly wonderful! The fic is going awesome so far! Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm so happy that Jou and Kaiba got back together finally. It was so sad seeing them both all depressed 'cause they were apart, but everything's great now... Except for the shooting. Oh, and Yuai. Poor her! She gets rescued, right?! Oh, I hope she does! And Mokuba! He'll feel so much better once Kaiba returns, ne! Eee! This fic is wonderful! Me and my frinds actually talk about it in the real world, after school and stuff! Kepp it going! We're all waiting to see what heppens!
| Reviewed By: RyokoMink [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 22:44 CST
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Whee!! It's been three days and I've finally finished reading your fic! (I had to go to skool so that's a very good reason why it took me so long.) It's very good I must say... Keep writing more,ne? ^_^
| Reviewed By: Game girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 22:11 CST
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need more. must up date.!!!! Pleezzzzz!!!!!!!!! O.......MY......GOD....THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER!!!!
| Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 03:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, my... I just got through reading your fic from ch 1 all the way to ch. 14! Oh, gods! My neck hurts! And it... Dawn already?! Damn! I got school tomor-er... Today. I think I'm going to die in class, heh, heh... But it was sooooo completly worth it!!! This has got to be one of the best fics I have ever read! Ever! Everything... Is actually not OOC to a point of blargh-ing! I love it!! I'm dieing to see how you end this! Please, favor the fan fic community with your awesome-o-powa talent and keep writting! Oh, man! I'm gonna go email people to read this one, 'cause, yes. It is that good!PS: I noticed that in your fic, you managed to use italics. MM.org is ignoring all the formatting in my fics! Please, oh great and wonderous fan fic writer, grace me with how you manged to do this?! What formate did you save it as? What program did you type in? Anything that might help me figure out how to fic erronious formating way! Thanks..... Now, if you don't mind, I'm going to go sleep for about an hour till I have to get up again, and go to school. And die. Ja!
| Title: Yeah
Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC (not signed in) On: February 28, 2004 12:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright another chapter up, keep it coming, I hope joe and Kaiba stay this time, and I hope Yami finds out about that creep who is blackmailing Yuai and does something about it, if you catch my drift. Anywho, another great chap.
| Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC (NLI) On: February 24, 2004 09:55 CST
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Oh no! Kaiba"s sick.....I hope nurse Joey can ring him back to health.....lol anywho, great job.
| Reviewed By: joufan On: February 22, 2004 20:29 CST
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it was really good so far, u should write some more
| Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 21:36 CST
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This is really funny. Coffee does that to me too. People have been known to run when I'm hyper. RUN, SHE IS DRINKING COFFEE AGAIN!!!!
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