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| "My Cuzzin Shuuichi AKA Kurama" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Title: a man
Reviewed By: lizardbreth On: February 17, 2004 06:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man I can't make up my mind on hiei or inu hiei or inu o well it'll most like be hiei aneway I relly love this story please update soon
| Reviewed By: FrbddnAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT was too funny. girl scout cookies! hahaha that has got to be the funniest part of your story so far. lol. update soon
| Reviewed By: dark huntress On: February 15, 2004 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far it's really good. Update soon.
| Reviewed By: FrbddnAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
it seems like its gonna turn into a funny fic, i dont know why but it does? i like it cant wait for the next chapter
| Reviewed By: Silver elemental kitsune On: January 20, 2004 06:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's pretty good so far. But please make the chappies longer.
| Title: kurama meet ur cousin kagome
Reviewed By: kween On: December 31, 2003 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
alrite,make dis a hiei/kagome fic.k kagome goes to see kurama and his lil sister moana,moana-wears black chinese clothes(like ranma),hair in a ponytail,her shirt is a vest,and showing a black tangtop,dark blue eyes,black hair wit brownish gold streaks.powers-fire,lighting,ice.hobby-matrial arts,street racing,dancing,best bar tender,and theif. her story is that wen she was 5 her father took her away in china and was trained to be the destoryer of demons and sussced.now she returned and kurama is teaching her how to have manners and act polite.she has the additude of yuske and the not caring thing of hiei. later,moana aka 10,fights inuyasha,and can weild his sword,but then the sword true master is 10 not inu,not sesshy,not their father.wen dis happens naraku wants 10 to join him and destory inuyasha,she aggreed and fights them but then betrays naraku and killed him and took the rest of the shards.every1 finds out and search 4 her and find a dead pristess kikyo dead along wit inu.10 returned home and jewal wit to halfs of it and fused it together 4 kagome.everyone races to kuramas and find blood on the floor leading to the backyard to find 10 kneeling down wit the jewal floating above her hand.10 was chanting a spell and the jewal started to glow,revealing,it showed 10 her memories of her father,and the protector of the jewal fighting side by side,then she saw her self,waering chinese dress short white,hair in 2 buns wit white/red ribbions,her dress had 2 slits at the sides,and no sleeves.and on her forehead had a marking of royalty,she still had dark blue eyes,black hair with streaks,and bangs,she was the vampire princess 10.and kurama same.
| Reviewed By: Mockingbird917 On: December 31, 2003 10:36 CST
Comment/Review:
This is an interesting idea, but I hope your next chapters are a bit longer. Update soon.
| Reviewed By: Chrislea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 07:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, do you always write with grammar like this? Look the idea is interesting, but if you don't fix the tenses, etc, you'd better pray the idea is enough to hold people's interest.
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