| "My Cuzzin Shuuichi AKA Kurama" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: June 22, 2004 15:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
so sad..... Koenma's going to be furious though. And Sessho's in the modern era???
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 08:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLESE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON IT WAS GETTING TO THE BEST PART!!!!!
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Reviewed By: flygirl 13 (not signed in) On: May 31, 2004 20:54 CDT
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this is really great also who is kagome paired up with plz plz plz plz plz update really really really really really really really (takes breath) really soon
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Title: COME ON
Reviewed By: KURAMALOVER3000 On: April 30, 2004 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE. SHESSH IS THIS ALL I GET. ITS REALLY GOOD BUT PLESAE UPDATE OR I"LL NEVER LET YOU FORGET IT.
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Title: Yea! another crossover
Reviewed By: Youkos_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome! I love it! Please update soon. Oh yea, this should be a Kagome/Hiei fic all the way!! Kep ug the good work. Ja ne. Youkos-Rose
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 18:27 CST
Comment/Review:
LOL! okay, I really shouldn't laugh, cosidering I'm a guide, but still *continues to laugh*
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Reviewed By: mental On: February 25, 2004 18:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello, I'm going to say this as nice as I posibly can.You can't make Kagome go of with another man!Inuyasha is her boyfriend not some other bastard (not that I hate Hiei or Yusuke I love Yu Yu Hakusho)keep her with Inuyasha!I'm not gonna stop bitchin' about this if you stick her with someone that is not Inuyasha!I will kill myself if you make her like another person she belong with Inuyasha remember you don't want Kagome to be with another man.YOU DON'T WANT TO HEAR ME BITCHIN' ABOUT ANYTHING TRUST ME I'VE LOST ALOT OF FRIENDS, THERAPIST, AND ANGER MANAGMENT CLASSES LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Now excuse me I'm gonna kill someone else for parring Kagome with someone else and for prescribing me steroids(and that person is my fat ass doctor)Bye bye. (^_^)
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Title: a man
Reviewed By: lizardbreth On: February 17, 2004 06:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man I can't make up my mind on hiei or inu hiei or inu o well it'll most like be hiei aneway I relly love this story please update soon
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Reviewed By: FrbddnAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT was too funny. girl scout cookies! hahaha that has got to be the funniest part of your story so far. lol. update soon
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Reviewed By: dark huntress On: February 15, 2004 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far it's really good. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: FrbddnAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
it seems like its gonna turn into a funny fic, i dont know why but it does? i like it cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Silver elemental kitsune On: January 20, 2004 06:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's pretty good so far. But please make the chappies longer.
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Title: kurama meet ur cousin kagome
Reviewed By: kween On: December 31, 2003 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
alrite,make dis a hiei/kagome fic.k kagome goes to see kurama and his lil sister moana,moana-wears black chinese clothes(like ranma),hair in a ponytail,her shirt is a vest,and showing a black tangtop,dark blue eyes,black hair wit brownish gold streaks.powers-fire,lighting,ice.hobby-matrial arts,street racing,dancing,best bar tender,and theif. her story is that wen she was 5 her father took her away in china and was trained to be the destoryer of demons and sussced.now she returned and kurama is teaching her how to have manners and act polite.she has the additude of yuske and the not caring thing of hiei. later,moana aka 10,fights inuyasha,and can weild his sword,but then the sword true master is 10 not inu,not sesshy,not their father.wen dis happens naraku wants 10 to join him and destory inuyasha,she aggreed and fights them but then betrays naraku and killed him and took the rest of the shards.every1 finds out and search 4 her and find a dead pristess kikyo dead along wit inu.10 returned home and jewal wit to halfs of it and fused it together 4 kagome.everyone races to kuramas and find blood on the floor leading to the backyard to find 10 kneeling down wit the jewal floating above her hand.10 was chanting a spell and the jewal started to glow,revealing,it showed 10 her memories of her father,and the protector of the jewal fighting side by side,then she saw her self,waering chinese dress short white,hair in 2 buns wit white/red ribbions,her dress had 2 slits at the sides,and no sleeves.and on her forehead had a marking of royalty,she still had dark blue eyes,black hair with streaks,and bangs,she was the vampire princess 10.and kurama same.
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Reviewed By: Mockingbird917 On: December 31, 2003 10:36 CST
Comment/Review:
This is an interesting idea, but I hope your next chapters are a bit longer. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Chrislea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 07:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, do you always write with grammar like this? Look the idea is interesting, but if you don't fix the tenses, etc, you'd better pray the idea is enough to hold people's interest.
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