| "Sod's Survival house (OF HELL!)" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Title: P.S
Reviewed By: Sheamaru-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 09:44 CST
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P.S above the actual letter.....THIS STORY ROX!!
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Reviewed By: Sniper-of-Death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 09:42 CST
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START REVIEWING!
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Title: Ideas?? 2
Reviewed By: Sheamaru-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 09:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey thanx for using me ideas, I didn't know it they where good. But this time it's a lot harder. Okay, Naraku continues to give her cooking lessons. Maybe in one lesson she messes up and Naraku has to turn into a fire egstinuisher? Inuyasha has to run to keep the girls away from his ears, but this is between hair care tips with Sesshomaru. Mirkou watches Hojo from afar when he goes to talk with Sango, Sota tells Sango about Miroku, nuff said. Inuyasha may be able to find peace when the girls dicover Shippou's tail. The girls continue to complement Sesshomaru, and...is Kouga still there? If he is the girls could develop crushes on him. A lot of people think he's cute. I dunno this parts a bit harder but I hope my idea's help.
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Reviewed By: Sniper-of-Death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 00:09 CST
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YAY U REVIEWED!
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Title: Ideas??
Reviewed By: Sheamaru-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well first off, all of the female of Kagome's friends have to play with Inuyasha's ears. Hojo should be curious about all of the 'men' she is in this house with. Also the girls should ask Sesshomaru how he gets his hair so nice. That would be funny. Hojo could start to like Sango which will set Miroku off. Or Kouga and Inuyasha find out that Kagome was sorta 'seeing' Hojo in her own world and they refuse to speak to her. Kagome's mom should ask Naraku for cooking lessons. (since you make him such a good cook!!) I dunno if you like my ideas. Write me!! earthshakerq2@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: chickenlover23 On: January 24, 2004 23:28 CST
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this is actually chickenlover2, u should use my earlier idea or someting similar. jaken does make alot of things more interesting around the house..
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Reviewed By: Mis trissy On: January 24, 2004 23:25 CST
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umm...put in barney or barbielike lifesize and see wat the peple do make hojo a pervert
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Reviewed By: lovesu2much On: January 24, 2004 23:23 CST
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u should put jaken in the fic and have him working for kagomes friends and hojo orders him to fight inuyasha for kagome...that would be interesting
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Reviewed By: jackal 101 On: January 24, 2004 23:22 CST
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UPDATRE MOW!!!!!!1!!
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Reviewed By: im2hot On: January 24, 2004 23:21 CST
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update pls
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Reviewed By: Sniper-of-Death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 22:28 CST
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The ones from BB don't count...
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Reviewed By: Sniper-of-Death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 22:09 CST
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BB! I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE!
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Reviewed By: Sniper-of-Death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 22:08 CST
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Looks like you all reviewwd...I think...I hope...
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Reviewed By: Big-Brother [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 21:49 CST
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DO IT!
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Reviewed By: Big-Brother [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 21:49 CST
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DO IT!
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