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Reviewed By: AngelPrincess17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an execellent story!!!! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 12:52 CDT
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Ok, I'm not one to complain, but you should get someone to beta-read for you. The spellings are either not right or it's the wrong word (ex: "pour" should be "poor"). That was the only thign that made it hard to follow. Besides that, it was rather enjoyable. I would like to see new chapters to this, but I hope you find someone to beta-read for you. I'm open, so if you send me an email (in my profile) asking me to, I'll gladly take your offer. Please don't be discouraged, I'm only trying to help you become a better writer than you already are.
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Title: yami-shi-tenshi
Reviewed By: yami-shi-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 07:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great ...brought..sniffle..tears to my eyes...sniffle...please update I love you writings so far ^ .^
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Title: tell me!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: yami-shi-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 12:01 CDT
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you cant do this to me please update soon nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo... ....noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.......n nnnnnnoooooooooooooooooooooooooo...... DMANITT tell me !!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotten Candy (Not logged in) On: June 16, 2004 11:37 CDT
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Very good questions... I wanna knowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww *pants slightly and takes a deep breath* ....ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwww... whew... Ok... I'm done ^_^;;
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Title: Error
Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 20:14 CST
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opps sry it looked like my reviews were screwed up so i was just checking with one of my own
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Reviewed By: Med On: February 27, 2004 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more this is a really good story!!!!
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good start to the lemon ^^. Wait... Are you gonna do a lemon? I hope so! ^^''. Update soon!
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Title: me
Reviewed By: The Shadows On: February 14, 2004 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't get rid of me I'm going to keep reading your stories!!! Because I care!
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Reviewed By: mOOferZ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 00:58 CST
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please please continue!!! it's really good!! ^_^
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Title: me
Reviewed By: Shadows On: January 15, 2004 21:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I need more crave more give me more
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Reviewed By: Nicky_brightstar On: January 13, 2004 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great start to the fic and I cant wait until you add more. keep up the good work!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: Atem On: January 08, 2004 08:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is A good story and the only one i've reviewed out of about 20 since i came here it has very good creativity and it's very fun to read and if i remember it has no spelling erorrs i can't wait to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: DragonMistress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved your fic so far you gotta continue it!!!
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic so far! Though, can you make more paragraphs because in the big paragraphs, I think I got lost a couple of times ^^''. Oh, you went too fast, but the detail in this fic is good. The wolves sounded like rabid wolves ^^', but the wolf that was ontop of Yugi, sounded alot like Yami... Could it have been Yami? Oh well. I ask too many questions. I like the lime that you put in here and whatnot. Or is it called fluff? Lime fluff, whatever. I love them both. Please update soon! I wanna read what happens next! Ja'ne for now! P.S. Witch is the witch/wizards thing. Which is like which one is this? ^^''.
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