Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic so far! Though, can you make more paragraphs because in the big paragraphs, I think I got lost a couple of times ^^''. Oh, you went too fast, but the detail in this fic is good. The wolves sounded like rabid wolves ^^', but the wolf that was ontop of Yugi, sounded alot like Yami... Could it have been Yami? Oh well. I ask too many questions. I like the lime that you put in here and whatnot. Or is it called fluff? Lime fluff, whatever. I love them both. Please update soon! I wanna read what happens next! Ja'ne for now! P.S. Witch is the witch/wizards thing. Which is like which one is this? ^^''.
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