| "I Want To Love You" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 20:17 CST
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Awesome story. I absolutely loved it. Although, your chapters could be longer. I'd love to be your beta reader.
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Reviewed By: Lady Kaela [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Please update soon.
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Title: meng
Reviewed By: eMeLynoOoPeE On: February 01, 2004 02:55 CST
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continue continue... wow kagome is the bad girl.. hehe is inuyasha in this one or is it only those four hmm?? try to update see you soon chow....
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 20:29 CST
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I luve ur fic, but ummm can I ask wat a beta reader is?? Ur fics so diry....I like!
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Title: Beta reader job...
Reviewed By: Flamingwillows [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you still need a beta reader, I'm willing. Email me at flamingwillows@yahoo.com if you still need! Okay, onto the review. I must say I love this story. The sexual tension is very clear and very well portrayed. Keep it up! Ja, for now, Willow-chan
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: January 31, 2004 15:44 CST
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Bravo! This is da fic! Great! Adios!
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Reviewed By: trihn On: January 31, 2004 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the fic! I WOULD LOVE TO BE YOUR BETA READER! i love english and my mind almost never leaves the gutter ;) my email address is: bee4evermine@yahoo.com hope to hear from you
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Title: i want to love you
Reviewed By: whit On: January 31, 2004 10:54 CST
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Wow!!! damn this is a good fic and i want to read more!!! must uopdate it asap. OVERALL RATING: 10
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 10:01 CST
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Were can I look at bubblesbb03's stories??? I was looking for her on this web site and couldn't find her name..... so are her stories here or on ff.net??
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Reviewed By: charkoal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 07:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there. This is a really great story you have going here. I don't usually read Inu-Yasha fanfics, but my friend introduced it to me and told me to read it, so I read the first chapter and was pretty much hooked. The idea is somewhat used, that Kagome's somewhat of a whore (I get this information via my sister, just in case I'm wanting to know what she does in the fics my sis reads ... -.-; ), but you use it in interesting ways, and that makes it better. So, the first thing I want to say is to keep up the good work, because your story's very good. Can't wait to see what happens next. \\ The second thing is to offer my services to you as a beta reader. I do have quite a perverted mind, although hardly anybody notices. Then again, nobody's asked. I don't mind reading hentai-type writings and sometimes get a kick out of it. But, really, I'm offering to be a beta reader because I do believe my grammar and spelling skills are quite good. I'm often sent my friends' school essays to check over them, make sure they make sense and that everything's worded/spelled correctly. So, in conclusion, if you think you need a beta reader, and that I would be good for the job, let me know. Be glad to help you out XD You can email me at wordaholic84@optonline.net - that's my most used address - and let me know whether or not you've accepted my offer. And, even if not, I'm always around to chat! Ciao and good luck with the story! ^_^
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Title: Beta offer
Reviewed By: broken_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 05:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, very interesting fic. I'm definately enjoying the storyline and how you portray the characters. And I know I'm going to hate myself for this later, but you said you needed a beta reader, and I happen to have very good grammar skills. I already have several authors that are very happy with my work. And you said the person had to have an ecchi mind. That would be me. Just check out my fic, "That's Just Wrong". Or any other of my fics. Prime example of my, ahem, talents. Well, get back to me. My email address is crash_and_burn48654@yahoo.com Later - broken_angel, a.k.a. Crash
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Reviewed By: Anime-Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 02:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this thing where he doesn't know that she is the bandit...Although you know at the end they have to hook up and then hes all like oh so you are the bandit or finds out before...Anyway update becuase this is good
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Reviewed By: Jassy On: January 30, 2004 23:43 CST
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I love your story it is so freaking cool. Now about the beta reader, I could give it a try, and mind like a pervert is what I am known for, and plus I love english, weird huh? lol, ok you can email me at Sassiestarfire2@aol.com -Sassie
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(2 lazy 2 sign in) On: January 30, 2004 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll give being your reader a try and plaese please update really really soon
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Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 23:29 CST
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u make me very anxious for more i must say by the way god i never knew how ooc someone can get the characters well u have one theprize with that so far i must say. cya!
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