| "Worst than the Twilight Zone" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: Azzmidia On: March 29, 2004 10:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
man i dont know what to say about that. Despite my hating it, i liked it at the same time. never in my life have i seen poor little Inuyasha so abused and degrated, nor have i ever seen Kikyou so evil, and i have seen her pretty twisted before. There were quite a few spelling errors, only in the "coulds" instead of "couldnts", or the "hers" instead of "hims", but it didnt take anything away from the story. I'll have to check up on this story and see if you have added anything ocationally. thanks for the twisted amuzment.
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Reviewed By: Tk On: March 17, 2004 02:24 CST
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okay story...
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 14:15 CST
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i loved that i hope you can save inuyasha soon. poor inu-chan ... i love how kikyo is the bitch of the fic! i have to go mom will be home soon ja ne!
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Reviewed By: LYW On: February 22, 2004 14:46 CST
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Interesting and well written. You need some ideas. Well from what I've read I can see in the near future Kikyo actually giving Inuyasha to Kagome. Since she made it so Inuyasha can't have pleasure and I think she would assume that Kagome would use Inuyasha as a sex toy hurting Inuyasha in the process.(After all that talk when Kagome tried to buy Inuyasha it's only reasonable that she think that Kagome would use him as a sex toy.) That's what I see happening but weither you write it that way or not is up to you.
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Reviewed By: Tiger_gurl On: February 22, 2004 09:26 CST
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this is getting good
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Title: please oh please up date for my own sanity
Reviewed By: InuYasha loves me [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wait...i don't have any sanity...but still up date the story is great...and poor inu...he must really be in pain...get him to KAgome...!!!! he needs her...and she...well...she needs him (corny i know) I like the fact that Kagura is a good guy though (good girl)she really isn't that bad even in the actually series...since she deos hate naraku and all
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Reviewed By: Tiger_gurl On: February 16, 2004 21:37 CST
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UPDATE!
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Title: I wonder why i bother putting a title UP DATE
Reviewed By: InuYasha loves me [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please oh please up date soon!!! I love this story it's so said and Kikyou should die!!!! I don't like her at all she is a true bitch...Kagome should get InuYasha but that's just an opionion!!! please I want to see what happens you made the last chappie cliffy!!!! So unfair!!! Up DATE PLEASE!!!!
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Title: This is something new
Reviewed By: L-N-L On: February 07, 2004 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 15:08 CST
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plz plz plz update soon!! poor inu...save him plz!!!! luv yur story!!! update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: whatever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 02:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: alo
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 15:27 CST
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hey i really like your fic kikyou sould die (ya i like kikyou and all i feel more pitty for her) BUT she should DIE poor Inu yasha i feel so sorry for him i hope Kagome gets him Ok Pleaze update soon.....Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko (not signed in yet again) On: January 27, 2004 11:20 CST
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Yaa KIKYOU SHOULD DIE!! Along with Naraku. Still need someone to go over it before you post it, but great nonetheless. It is a very original idea, not many Inu fans would torture him like that. but I suppose that it'll make reevenge all the more sweeter, wouldn't it *grins evilly at thought of torturing Kikyou* Anyway! I know you just updated but I don't care. Update. NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Jaa na firestarmistress85-san! And no more A/Ns for chappies plz... *makes puppy-dog eyes*
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: InuYasha loves me [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story keep on writing!!!! please up date
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Reviewed By: LYW On: January 26, 2004 16:58 CST
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An interesting fanfic. I hope you write more soon. I want to see what happens next.
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