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Reviewed By: 2insane4u On: January 15, 2004 17:30 CST
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Hi! I jus noticed that u wrote that u would need help with the story. So if u have n e thin u wanna ask me e-mail me at LadySerenity12@aol.com! Hope ya update soon!
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 20:49 CST
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Can't wait 'till you upload the next chapter!! Please do it soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: 2insane4u On: January 12, 2004 16:02 CST
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YES! I get 2 b in your fanfic! Thank u so much! ( Goes in2 a victory pose) I am so happy! ( Fireworks explode everywhere)
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Reviewed By: divastarz63 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 15:31 CST
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Reviewed By: 2insane4u On: January 11, 2004 16:01 CST
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I'll jus add clothes n e way. Please don't b annoyed. Clothes: A long-sleeved white blouse, with an black overall skirt. ( U no a mini skirt and straps) Ankle length white laced sox with black mary-jane shoes. ( The kind of shoes with a strap over them.) I hope u add me.
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Reviewed By: 2insane4u On: January 11, 2004 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This seems like a fun fic. Name: Tsuki Age: 14 ( But she's a type of genius so she skips a few grades an is in the same grade as the YGO group.) Characteristics: Um...Light blue sparkling eyes, Black hair in pigtails with white bangs. Er r we supposed 2 add clothes? if we do let me no. Can fight. She is a martial artist. Let's say a good 1 an not 2 mess with her. Personality: Smiles a LOT ( even at brink of death), likes 2 laugh, can cook,is kind, REALLY scary wen angry, and cares 4 others. Umm..I don't want a millennium item. Jus a normal girl hoo beats up boys if they provoke her. ^-^0 I guess dating Yami or Marik. Hope ya add my character. If there is anythin missin jus let me no!
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Reviewed By: Clawpaw On: January 11, 2004 15:32 CST
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Oooh. I like it so far! It would be so cool to get sucked into the Yugioh world! It would kinda be cool if I could be in but that's completly up to you.Name: Mika Atsui Age:16 Looks: Very short brown hair, green eyes, black t-shirt and carpenter jeans Personality: Very shy and quiet, but very nice, loves peace and animals, and quite ticklish. Romance Interest? Seto Kaiba. If not I'll just settle for Jounouchi (Joey). Anyway, I hope you continue, too many fics are discontiued and they always happen to be ones you like, ya know?
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Title: (Starts hoping up and down)
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 20:54 CST
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Yeah! I'm going to be with Ryou!!!! YEAH!!! Oh, I don't mind at all that I'm going to be older. Believe me, I pray everyday that I suddenly become older, or taller, at least. Yep! I'm Tabby. My good friend Momma Cat loves to call me that. You can call me that, or if you want, you can give me a different name. ^_^ I don't really care, long if I'm with Ryou. . .(Daydreams). Oh, upload the next chapter soon! I'm dying to see what happens!!!!
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat! On: January 10, 2004 18:14 CST
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Tabby is guess what... TAB! The other girl in this fic. ^_^ Shes one of the 'girlfriend's' in my story Anime Hostage Wedding: Next Generation and my new buddy. ^_^ You don't have to call her Tabby but I do. Actually I don't but so what? Sure I'm not apt in the game but I know some stuff. If your willing to put me in the story I'm willing to help out. MY HAIR IS PINK! YEAH! I don't know why but I keep telling everyone about it. I like my pink hair alot. ^_^ PINK PINK PINK!
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Reviewed By: phoenix tamer On: January 10, 2004 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great story so far...wish i could get pulled into the ygo world..i would really like it if i could be in ur fic too? here's my info in case u decide to use it..oh and i dont care about he cursing and hentai stuff..i aint inta dat. Ok here goes..name: Alyssa Age: 17 appearance: brown hair to shoulders with red streaks through it, about 5'9" skinny, very pretty with browny green eyes Personality: innocent and naive believes ppl to easily, she is very nice and shy romance interest: ..hmm i'd say malik or yami malik and if they are taken..duke or (ryouji otogi) is fine ...thanks! and happy writing ur doing great!
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You kind of switched writing styles a few times there. Try not having so many switches of POV's. It might help. Just some adivce. Well, anyho, it's pwetty good so far. Ideas? Well, I don't know. If you need me to come up with ideas, I'll try. Well, keep up the good work, and upload the next chapter soon!
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 11:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would love to be pulled into the world of Yu-Gi-Oh. . . . Well it was good. Can't wait 'till the next chapter. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 07:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Well if Tabby is here I will join in! *mutters although I DO like cussing and dirtyness ^_^) Name: Dirty D! ... okay its Diana Age:18 Characteristics: Blonde hair (no pink dye yet) brown eyes Personality: Pepsi! Okay thats not a personality trait but I drink lots a Pepsi so I'm slightly crazy. I wanna flirt alot. Is groping okay? If not I'll live. I wouldn't mind dueling either, I want to use the name 'Lady Luck'. A romantic interest? Not exactly making it easy for me are you? Seto yeah I think. I wanna make it like a Excel Saga thing. If you don't know what I'm talking about it doesn't matter. If you put me in I'll be forced to help anyway right? I look forward to your response! Call her Tabby!
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Title: Hey, again.
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 15:50 CST
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Okay, just want to say a few things. Can I be with Yami Bakura and Bakura, or Ryou and Bakura?(Looks hopeful). Please? Please? They're sooo cute and sexy. . .(Faints and falls off the chair). Wait!(Gets back on the chair). Okay, I can't faint yet. I don't mind helping yeah out. It's cool. Well, if you hafta, e-mail me. See yeah!(Faints0.
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 16:37 CST
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I wouldn't mind being in the fan fiction. I don't mind that it isn't going to have any hentai or curses. I'm not into them. Okay. Age: twelve. Characteristics: Um, er, well, I have brown hair with blond high lights. Brown eyes, and that's about it. . . . Personality: Well, it's kinda hard to judge yourself. So, um timid around people I don't know, but I get outgoing when I get to know the people. Sometimes goes sugar high, but I suppose you don't need to know that. Okay, um, I think that's it. I don't want a Millennium Item. I'll just be normal, I guess. Just tell me if you need more. Oh, upload soon!
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