| "Love, Murder, and Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: yay kuso computer
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 08:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay the dam computer is finally letting me write a review i thought i was gonna have to kick it again but i guess not ok well keep up the good work and update again soon please? i'd love you 4ever if you did ^_____^ update again soon
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 21:32 CDT
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Interesting. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- nsi On: September 06, 2004 21:16 CDT
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Yeaaaaaaaa!!! you started writing again too! hehe, me so happy! Love this story! Keep writing please =D I know this is short but I'll write more later. Byeeeeeeee!! --Autumn
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: August 04, 2004 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAA!! WHAT A TWIST AND A SHOCK!!! *is being severly over dramatic* hehehe. Didn't see that one coming. Through the whole story I'm trying to decide what the new twist was. First it was: Rin was killed off... Second-- Rin is/was a demon...And then third everything was spelled out with letters from a keyboard and so I couldn't keep on guessing. =( NO WORRIES! Loved the chapter, just as I love the story. When do Kagome and Inuyasha get to be reunited? te he he he *Is thinking thoughts* really thoughts? no,yes really! Do I sound like gibberish to you right now? Because even to me I think I do.. Well, I will quit my rambling and leave you with a bye-bye now! --Autumn PS-- LOVE the lile "And I love you uys in non sexual way" commet from the other fics..hehe,just remembered that right now. BYEEEEEEEEE
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: July 30, 2004 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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DAAAAAAAAMN GIRL! you've out done your self this time! That was an amazing chapter. I really really reaaaaaaally love this story. Glad I finally had time to read the new chapter. Woo-hoo Rin's here!=D At first I'm like how can she have a seven year old daughter when she's only 26. but some how my math came out to be that she had the kid at eleven.. Then I realized what an Idiot I just was there. (Maybe I shouldn't even share that, lol) ((I'm smart, really!) Just a little tired and worn out from the sun all day long. But WOW! Great action scenes! Things are reaally getting interesting now. Well I better got on to read the rest of your updates! Byeeeeeee --Autumn
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 01:10 CDT
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Damn. So Rin is the mom of the kid with Sess. And the dad and mom may have just now been killed. Not to mention Kagome's mom or Kaede. Wow who else are you going to kill or maim? Great story. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: July 14, 2004 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yeeeeeeeeey!! you kept on making this story.I am the happiest girl alive! *does the happy dance* I love this story, action storys are the bestest. hmm, I wonder what will happen next... *rubs chin and thinks* Sesshoumaru will get a dog and it will go poopy in the fridge and eat a whole wheel of cheese???? (Yes, too much Will Ferrel) hehehehehe. Or anything close to that extent? hmmm. Anywho, keep it up! Love it! Make more soon pleaseeeeeeee ---Autumn
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: July 06, 2004 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Don't you dare delete this story missy! =P why? Because I love it =(. Another great chapter to this story..I no know why more people don't review... maybe they're lazy? ps- the whole "Glen.. glen glen glen," Part definitly made me laugh. I'm glad I'm not the only one who finds that commercial absolutly fabulous. Infact, I'm quite sure that while at the bar this weekened we spent a good 2 hours putting everyone's name that we knew to that song.. It was even better when the live band that was playing did a whole "inroduce the band" to it too, hehehe. So yes, enough of me getting off topic. The bottom line is: this story is really good. Don't get rid of it. *begs* Make more chapters soon please!!! ---Autumn
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Title: hehehehehehe
Reviewed By: Aitu-- NEVER EVER SIGNED IN! On: June 28, 2004 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dun dun DUN!! So much for me to review on. Fabulous chapter darling, absolutly fabulou. First thing-- the name Tobias. *giggles*, short for Toby, hehehe. Yes, I'm in one of those moods today. Could it be because I fell asleep in the sun for 2 hours? Perchance. Now how about a huge, awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! for the scene where Kagome leaves all crying and kicking and screaming. That made autumn sad! lol Then the car accident part, I was like "aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaagh! Car accident!" I could hear the metal crunching in my mind, it was creepy! Now where was I.. I don't remember, I lost track.. DAMNIT! But anyway, good work my friend! I heart this story very much, please make more chapters! te he he he. Perhaps I will have my giggling under control by then.. well, most likely not, but oh well. Gotta go! Later skater ---Autumn, Auti, Aitu.. ITS ALL THE SAME :D
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Reviewed By: Aitu ( not signed in.. I am lazy) On: May 24, 2004 02:00 CDT
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Ouuu. I did enjoy that chapter! I really did. But I had to go back to chapter 11 just like you suggested, hehe. Then everything made perfect sense. Such a sad image of Kagome leaving kicking and screaming, aww. Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next! Until then, Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ~Aitu
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Title: Making the rounds part 1
Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 22:25 CDT
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Yes!!! hahah, I did review!!! On to the next story, see you there!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love, love love.. That's all I have for this story. It's absolutly fabulous, and different which is good. I'll get confused, then a few chapters get un-confused, that's a good thing too. How can there only be 3 reviews? oh well, I guess that makes me #4! woohoo. Anywho, keep up writing, it's muy entertaining. Byeee bye
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Reviewed By: Dah88 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv it continue plz!!!!! I want to read more!
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Reviewed By: Horse_Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 19:23 CST
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Keep Writiinngggg!!!!!!!!!!!!! IIIIII Looooovvvveee your story!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 09:01 CST
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