Reviewed By: Twilight_Wolf On: January 04, 2004 10:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was pretty cool! I can't wait for your next chapter! But if Kuwabara wanted them to kiss, how come he stopped them?? Great job anyway! And good luck with your next chapter!!
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