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Reviewed By: white nummmin On: August 24, 2004 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noggin?...do youmean ninigen and the girls name is rin. Other than that i like this fic a lot
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Title: Good!
Reviewed By: Anonomos On: June 05, 2004 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't like the Sess/Kag paring. Plz add the next Chap O.K??
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: antisocial mint [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good, update soon :) i like how sess is obsessed! hehehehe
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Title: Rainstorm61879
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 02:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Not much so far but i'm hooked... not to nit pick but your spelling could use a little work. I'll point out the 2 things that bugged me most. Noggin-->try ningen and Ran--->try Rin. But as i always say nobody is perfect and anyone who thinks otherwise is just plain deluded. BTW I do really like the story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter
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Title: kit
Reviewed By: demonflare On: March 23, 2004 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i await next chapter so plz update soon
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Title: Me Likes!
Reviewed By: Dark Shadow Goddess On: February 22, 2004 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it! Please continue! There's just one thing I'd like to point out...the little girls name is actually spelled Rin and it's ningen not noggin...Just so you know! Please continue! Bye! ^-^
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: koimizu On: February 13, 2004 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very enjoyable ^^; so far so good. keep it coming...i just hope this doesnt take a turn for the worst and becomes a guy-guy thing. LOL but good job :D
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 18:41 CST
Comment/Review:
oooo this look like a good fic. I'm hooked on Sess/Kag fic now and your seems really interesting. I can't wait to see how you make them hook up!
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Reviewed By: Chipmunk On: February 13, 2004 11:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I seriously love Sess/Kag pairings its so cute abd romantic, I really wanted to read to see whjat happens it was getting good.
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Title: Great fic
Reviewed By: Naishi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fan fic!!! www.therealcrystalcorp.bravehost.com this is my hp
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chich27 On: February 12, 2004 19:40 CST
Comment/Review:
srri bout postin da same thing twice, my labbie screwed up...
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27 (2 lazy 2 sign in) On: February 12, 2004 19:39 CST
Comment/Review:
it's not much, but I like it! now I want da lemon... NOW? plz continue, isn't life a bitch when people don't review?
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27 (not signed in) On: February 12, 2004 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's not much, but I like it! now I want da lemon... NOW? plz continue, isn't life a bitch when people don't review?
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Reviewed By: lizardbreth On: February 11, 2004 04:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please continue
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Title: Please continue!
Reviewed By: Dark Shadow Goddess On: January 27, 2004 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit that your style and grammer are off a bit but I really see potential in this fic! Please continue I'll be waiting for it!
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