| "Running From The Past" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: SaoLaoAna On: January 12, 2004 17:31 CST
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Good chapter. I want to see Naraku killed instead of behind bars. Plus I think he deserves to die for everything he's done.
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Reviewed By: Del_kaidin :) On: January 12, 2004 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well seems the fhit has hit the san... as for Naraku... I want him to pay.... don't care how.. your fic you decide....
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Reviewed By: NangSaoAna On: January 11, 2004 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!Your style of writing also great in my opinion. You know how to make it suspencful but also romantic for the characters in it. You're very creative with your fanfics as well. I couldn't help but comment to you on that. As for what I think should happen in your fanfic while it runs its process is that Inuyasha and Kagome find out a way to get out of their ordeal with Naraku. But thats just what I think I'll leave the rest up to you to think up and write on. Well till your next update keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Del_Kaidin :) On: January 10, 2004 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there... you've got a nice story going here. A little quick on the becoming mates though... but that's me... I liked the seperation... but by becoming mates they have put her in more danger... I would think... Naraku is hanyou right? Won't he be able to tell? I got the feeling you were kind of afraid of them not being together.... so rushed... it's ok.. happens.. but just constructive critisim... don't be afraid of angst... sometimes it's good for the story.
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Reviewed By: Brennen_Sie_Drachen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 23:14 CST
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lol sorry about that. Why it put Karyn I don't know. It's just being stupid :P. lol night. Love to all :)
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Reviewed By: Karyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 23:12 CST
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YAY!!! lol yep preson with no life reading at midnight. lol I'm so happy!! I couldn't stand it thinking you might put Kagome with Naraku. *shakes head* Thanks. Love to all :)
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grrrr you have to kill Naraku! hes too evil!!! Please update soon!!! I really like your story!!!
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Reviewed By: Brennen_Sie_Drachen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 10:27 CST
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OH it's very very good. Don't change a thing in CH.11, but PLEASE PLEASE put Inu and Kagome back together. Love to all :)
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Reviewed By: shirahime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 02:50 CST
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just read chap 11, i liked it even though inu & kag split up, cos *hopefully* that would make them getting back together all the sweeter..they will get back again together someday .. right..right?!? i would like to see what is going on in inu's head right now and how is so able to keep his head/heart in check!!
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Reviewed By: shirahime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 02:49 CST
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just read chap 11, i liked it even though inu & kag split up, cos *hopefully* that would make them getting back together all the sweeter..they will get back again together someday .. right..right?!? i would like to see what is going on in inu's head right now and how is so able to keep his head/heart in check!!
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Reviewed By: shirahime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 23:06 CST
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the story line is fresh. thanks so much! umm sometimes i wish for a little more detail in the key points/times. that's just my thoughts..overall i am loving it though and can't wait to see what happens with naraku in the pic
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate naraku!!!! Grrrr, well please update soon!!! ^_^ I love your story!
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha is so nice and protective isn't he??? Heehee!!! They kiss alot!!! its cute!!! update soon!!! I love your story
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Reviewed By: darksqall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 13:49 CST
Comment/Review:
its great wat more needs to be said? ¿
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Reviewed By: YASMIN On: January 07, 2004 10:39 CST
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IT WAS NARAKU , WASNT IT , THAT BEAT UP HER GRANDPA! DOES SHIPPO LIKE HER?ANYWA CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
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