| "Haunted: Red and Amber" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: LYW On: January 26, 2004 16:33 CST
Comment/Review:
At the begining of the chapter you mentioned that Kagome was going into heat. Does that mean she is pregnant now?
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Reviewed By: MaryE On: January 24, 2004 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story--so well written--interesting idea, with a twist, as well--I like your take on Inu and Kag's thoughts--gives the fic a really 'well-rounded' feel to it--I can't believe you don't have more reviews^_^ This is a great fic and I can't wait for you to update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: NightstarAngel On: January 15, 2004 07:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story! Don't stop writting pls you are really good. I hope to see you updating soon. Ja ne ;)
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Reviewed By: Inu Girl On: January 11, 2004 14:07 CST
Comment/Review:
more chapters and longer chapter and I'll be happy so plese up date soon .
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