Reviewed By: Ranka On: January 24, 2004 20:54 CST Comment/Review: I wont rate you as I myself am a horrible fan fic writer; however, the audience doesn't gain much from the proluge. I'm intrigued by the genre and I have to say a punk Heero is something new to me. Try to develop more into his character and I'll be sure to continue to read. Don't be discouraged by lack of reviews; people dot review mostly because we have no idea on how to help you improve. I hope this helps you though, it'd be a shame for this fic to rot on your computer as you say.
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