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Title: I also agree
Reviewed By: Vaheedah Banu On: January 10, 2004 07:36 CST
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I just read the oponion of the other reviewer and I also agree with them about the "quotation marks"
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Reviewed By: Vaheedah Banu On: January 10, 2004 07:33 CST
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Kawaiiii It's such an interesting fic.the idea is really good. Hope you up date soon.
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Reviewed By: Maboroshichan On: January 09, 2004 22:33 CST
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I agree with the quotations. I got really confused and had to read a few lines, multiple times. I thought Yohji had developed Schu's power or something. Heh. But, it -is- a good story, and I look forward to seeing more.
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Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 14:07 CST
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It's a pretty interesting premise for a story. I like what I've read so far. Now for a little constructive criticism... When people are speaking in a story you should use quotation marks. "When you have quotation marks," the reviewer said, "You can tell when something is being spoken to someone." If the character is having internal thoughts that no one but the reader is meant to hear, then use single quote marks. 'I hope I'm not offending,' the reviewer thought to herself. Fix that and all should be good.
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