| "Cops and Kittens" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting take on things and well written. It's a shame it's been over a year since you've had the opportunity to update it. Hope the muse will strike you again on this fic and allow you to finish it.
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Reviewed By: neuroticsquirrel On: January 25, 2005 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Please come back and continue it!
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Reviewed By: NICKNAME! On: May 02, 2004 20:11 CDT
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I love Ran in this fic
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Reviewed By: anime gher [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 23:41 CST
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i'm interested. i'm pricqued. mas, por favor! hopefully longer luvin' scenes too :D
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Reviewed By: soxy On: February 07, 2004 02:00 CST
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I'm liking it so far, it's a noce plot idea. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Minstrel On: February 06, 2004 09:25 CST
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Another chapter - great. Gee, that's some bedside manner Aya's got there. Not.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: February 04, 2004 22:33 CST
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Very cool. Interesting view on this particular plot idea. Go you! ^_^ Do continue please.
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Reviewed By: vv On: January 22, 2004 03:20 CST
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"...calculating . . . and as fucking cold as the glaciers of Antarctica." "This guy definitely needs a personality transplant." Yeah, that's Aya all right. I don't know why he gets all the fanfiction. I like your idea here. It promises to be fun and already there's been a clash or two.
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Reviewed By: YOHJI IS MINE!! On: January 15, 2004 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KAWAII! I hope you update soon! btw- think you can make it a AyaXYohji? Ne?? Ja ne!
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Title: It looks much better now
Reviewed By: Seema devy On: January 12, 2004 08:24 CST
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Mmmm, not long ago I stumbled over this fic and to be honest it confused me a little. It looks MUCH BETTER now that you've fixed that quotation marks problem. Much more better indeed. It's a very good fic and I hope you'll up date soon. I guess many readers will have a good time with this fiction.
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 14:47 CST
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WOW, very good, I like the idea of Yohji not being in Weiß but still being a detective...great, I'm looking forward to the next part! Ja Koji-chan
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Title: I also agree
Reviewed By: Vaheedah Banu On: January 10, 2004 07:36 CST
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I just read the oponion of the other reviewer and I also agree with them about the "quotation marks"
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Reviewed By: Vaheedah Banu On: January 10, 2004 07:33 CST
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Kawaiiii It's such an interesting fic.the idea is really good. Hope you up date soon.
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Reviewed By: Maboroshichan On: January 09, 2004 22:33 CST
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I agree with the quotations. I got really confused and had to read a few lines, multiple times. I thought Yohji had developed Schu's power or something. Heh. But, it -is- a good story, and I look forward to seeing more.
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Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 14:07 CST
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It's a pretty interesting premise for a story. I like what I've read so far. Now for a little constructive criticism... When people are speaking in a story you should use quotation marks. "When you have quotation marks," the reviewer said, "You can tell when something is being spoken to someone." If the character is having internal thoughts that no one but the reader is meant to hear, then use single quote marks. 'I hope I'm not offending,' the reviewer thought to herself. Fix that and all should be good.
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