| "Mukuro's lie" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 23:16 CST
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*yawns*
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Reviewed By: Koritsune Dragonrider [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 22:14 CST
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HAPPY ENDING!!! ME like!!
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 21:45 CST
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Thank you all once again!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Ayla On: February 02, 2004 21:30 CST
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Yay! You wrote more! I love this story I love this story I love this story!! Yay!!!! Want last chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 19:32 CST
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*waves* Just looking!
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Reviewed By: Koritsune Dragonrider [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 19:23 CST
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KAWAII!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 12:50 CST
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* comes in* Hehe another reveiw i feel so speacial.
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Reviewed By: darkdemonchild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 12:49 CST
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*big happy grin* SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more more more more more! i hope the next chapter's a lemon. me like lemons ^_^;;;;;update soon please!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 12:20 CST
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* comes in with aq cup of coffee.* I think i should add the other chapter now
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Reviewed By: darkdemonchild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 12:18 CST
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teeheeheeheeheee so cute!!! i luv hikuro ^_^ so much like his kawaii dad hiei ^_^ awww poor kurama. oh well! as long as they live happily ever after! ^_^ hey! no insulting us ningens! we can be pretty cool!!! ^_^;;;; ok im done
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 12:06 CST
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Guess what/ My best friend is goin gto post a side story to this!! it will be at Fanfiction.net under the author name Hiei's pheonix girl. So go there and Read all about when Hikuro meets his grandma!! Should be up in a few days. Thank you!!
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Reviewed By: Koritsune Dragonrider [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 12:01 CST
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Please bring Hiei and Kurama back together! GERAT STORY!!!
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Reviewed By: Katy123 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 01:05 CST
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Thank you all for reading this story!!
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Reviewed By: Youko Starr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good story, the theft of the baby really surprised me, even though I don't think anything would have stopped Hiei or Kurama from taking revenge. I was surprised to get Mukuro get away scot free, I hope she gets hers in the end!
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Reviewed By: darkdemonchild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 13:52 CST
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teheheheheheheehehe haha mukuro. thats what u get!!! too bad hiei didnt kill her though. oh well! ^_^ please update again soon!!!! ^_^
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