| "Mukuro's lie" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Koritsune Dragonrider [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 22:55 CST
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NNNNNOOOOO!!! HIEI AND KURAMA CAN'T SPLIT UP!!! AND MAKE MUKURO GIVE THE BABY BACK!! THE BABY KNOWS WHO HIS REAL MOMMY IS!!*beats up Mukuro* GIVE! HIM! BACK! GIVE! HIM! BACK!
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Title: Kagome ayla
Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 21:12 CST
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I am sorry that you are upset with me!! Maybe next chapter will make you lik eme again and not want to hunt me down??
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Reviewed By: darkdemonchild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 21:10 CST
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awwwww poor kurama. he needs a hug from hikuro! ^_^ i hope he and hiei make up soon and hikuro tells hiei that he's kurama's kid not mukuro's. ^_^ more please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 20:49 CST
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*looks in the sky* start bright star light first star i see tonight. Wish i may. Wish i might have this wish i wish tonght!! Let me see my reveiws without having to reveiw myslef!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Ayla On: January 18, 2004 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.... That's amazing... I hate you so much right now... That's so awful... this had better not be the end or I'll be forced to hunt you down *glare* Continue... NOT a request...
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 19:36 CST
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*jumps in* hehehee
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Reviewed By: darkdemonchild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 19:34 CST
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ooooo smart little baby, knows that mukuro's not his mom. ^_^ goody! then once he learns how to talk he can tell hiei that! ^_^ post more! post more!! ugho time to go back to that horrible thing known as studying. >_< oh well, i must. duty calls! march! two three four march two three four *marches off into distance to study more*
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 19:18 CST
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*flys in*
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Reviewed By: Koritsune Dragonrider [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 19:13 CST
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THAT BIONIC BITCH STOLE HIEI AND KURAMA'S KID!!! GET HIM BACK HIEI!! KICK HER ASS!!
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 19:02 CST
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Hey everyone!!! I am excited!! why?? Cause if you people want after we finish this up we are wiling to write a third one!! Just let us know!
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Reviewed By: darkdemonchild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 18:46 CST
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whaaaaa so sad! poor hiei! poor kurama! evil mukuro DIE MUKURO!!!!! *shoots mukuro* ^_^ more please! ^_^ update update update!!!!! ^_^;;; sorry been studying for finals all day, it does stuff to me i swear
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 22:54 CST
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* slides in*
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Reviewed By: darkdemonchild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 21:08 CST
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weeeee another chapter!!!! ^_^ ooooo yay! i dont have to wait for very long until we see the baby!!! ^_^ *imagines mini hiei with red hair running around* hehehehehehehehehe. random thought time! u should make the baby a girl hiei with black hair and red highlights! that'd be cool ^_^ update soon please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 19:08 CST
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Hey everyone!! I fyou see this thank you again
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Reviewed By: PWLFSI On: January 16, 2004 19:07 CST
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Koritsune here again! HOLY LIVIN' FRIGGIN' !&@$!!! HIEI DID KNOCK KURAMA UP!! YAY!! NO KID FOR BIONIC B***!! YAY!!
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