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Reviewed By: Chaos Queen On: August 23, 2013 01:01 EDT
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I like this but 1) When Ranma wakes why is he calm he WANTED to die & it was stopped he should at least be a bit mad 2) When Vegeta threatens to kill him Ranma should have gone "Your not the first to say that if you wanna go then let's go because today is a good day to die |
Title: No.
Reviewed By: APL On: December 13, 2012 14:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
How fucking old are you? Because you sound like a barely pubescent little shit. Not to mention a misogynist. I would say you should be ashamed of this garbage, but you're clearly incapable of that emotion. Otherwise, you would have sooner killed yourself than subject another human being to such noxious waste. Easily among the most vile and stupid pieces of "fanfiction" I've ever read. |
Reviewed By: Mad Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2009 13:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like watching a car-crash in slow motion, it's painful but you can't look away...
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Reviewed By: Shikaze On: February 29, 2008 03:52 EST
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Though a bit on the OOC side, inconsistent and a bit none-connon logic, but then again what is the point of fanfiction if it is done to the letter of the cannon. The KOF, Bugs Bunny, and a few other throw in are unexpected, but accentuated the weirdness factor and enjoyability imo. However, the writing style is bizarre and a bit childish, but i read it more like an extended omake rather than a serious fanfiction. So I didn't mind it too much.
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Title: Final bouts
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 02:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting Very interesting indeed! I will peruse your other fictions with rapt intruige. Congratulations so far SM~
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Title: When will you update?
Reviewed By: Rictor Yagami On: August 06, 2005 17:16 EDT
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I wish to say this is a kickass story. But it leaves soem things unexplained. Here are some of them. 1.What happen to Ranma's tail since he is relly a sayin? 2.Is Genma even a human being when he took Ranma away? Also I think Gohan sould have won the fight against Ryoga for being a prick. As for Mousse,well like everyone mentioned from the reviews I read,the people are OOC. Pluse I hope Nabiki gets her ass kicked. Also will we hear from Herb and the Musk Dynasty? On last thing. Why the hell did you add Fat Bastard and Bugs Bunny? It makes no sceance. Good Luck to you do.
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Reviewed By: shampoofan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 23:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read it, and it was supposed to be an anime tournament, not some Austin Powers, Warner Bros. stuff. Why did you put Fat Bastard in it? Why Bugs Bunny? Come off that crap and edit that stuff off.
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Reviewed By: hentairoses On: October 13, 2004 15:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Belive it or not, I really didn't give this fic much of a chance considering it look to be the usual Ranma innocent riot act and death to the Nwc. First this fic should but waff in big letters becuase waff fic don't tend to make since anyway. Second I see someone been reading certain hentai fic about the Genma/Nodoka/Ryoga mom, but if you going to use this then it should come to light that dbz crew are going to have retrain Ranma and Ryoga if Genma was training them in anything goes, as such as you describe it, the oni blood can be blame for ryoga problem of being angry and no parental since he all by himself. and genma going to be in a world of trouble when the figure things out.
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Title: Note
Reviewed By: Kuno_Baby [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 01:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
My previous review was about the first few chapters. Couldn't stand the awfulness long enough to read the rest.
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Title: List of things wrong with ur fic!
Reviewed By: Kuno_Baby [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 01:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well. I have seen worse dbz ranma crosses, but that is only because there are so many fics out there. You have everyone OOC to some degree, mostly hugely, a contrived introduction and inconsistency all over. I thought that like some other fics it would get better after the beginning because you may not have know how to start it, but i was wrong, it got worse. You obviously have no idea what you are trying to do, unless this is a mindless bashing fic in which case try making it a LOT shorter. First: Power Levels: Make up your mind! If ranma is no where near as powerful as the Z fighters then why are they training to beat the less powerful NWC? Second: If ranma is a saiyan, then all the abuse he ahs suffered would make him at least as powerful as an android. He would not be that pathetic. Third: The entry was pathetic. Ranma began as suicidal and then just kinda dropped it? Im sorry but you gotta be a lot more depressed than that to even contemplate killing urself. Fourth: Why are they randomely helping some stupid stranger? Fifth: Add some sort of merging of worlds thing. Nerima and DBZ geography can't really coexist. Sixth: Try details. Don't concentrate on getting your story out but write what you see as happening. Describe it, don't just outline it. Last: I can't seem to find your plot. Did you hide it under a rock? What were you trying to have happen? All i can see is some overpowered DBZers prepping to kick poor human ass.
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Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 17:19 EDT
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my last reveiw here was ment for a different story that shares some laters simalirtys but in the other story ranma was traped as a girl and had come to accepte it before the story started and was sleeping with a guy in the first chapter if i remember the story right
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Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 07:44 EDT
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sigh nameks are single gender self reproduceing and you really need to make a better back story for ranma becomeing fully female and you should really flesh the story out more other than that not a bad story not a good one either but not bad
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Reviewed By: an author On: August 23, 2004 12:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am sorry but this fic is not that enjoyable. shadow megatron is WRONG about namekians. WATCH the damned series of dragonball, dragonball z and you will see that NO NAMEKIAN even piccolo has any genitalia let alone can mate with anyone else. it is a PROVEN fact that akira toriyama made the namekians A-SEXUAL. that right there ruins the effect of the entire story here with the crossover. no offense but unless piccolo actually makes a wish on the dragonballs to be even able to mate with someone it is IMPOSSIBLE to do so other wise. this little factor ruins the story for me because shadow megatron is going off of other fanfics to prove that piccolo has a sex drive and that he has genitalia to reproduce with other people. i can't read anymore of this fic because of that fact. later.
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Reviewed By: Dark_topaz On: August 22, 2004 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Piccolo and Kasumi i love it
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Title: Fun stuff
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 02:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are a lot of things wroung with this but most of it can be overlooked seeing as this isn't a serious fic. If it were you've got some serious OOC situations to deal with. Aside from the fact that most and not all the people in the tournament deserve the beating of their lives the fic makes good use of humor and was a fun read. Do update because I would like to read about a cetain pervert getting his butt kicked (Though I thought that more of a job for Vegeta seeing as Roshi is around Happosai's level of skill.) This is a good fun fic so please keep it going because we all know that we need a good laugh once in a while.
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