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Title: Fun stuff
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 02:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are a lot of things wroung with this but most of it can be overlooked seeing as this isn't a serious fic. If it were you've got some serious OOC situations to deal with. Aside from the fact that most and not all the people in the tournament deserve the beating of their lives the fic makes good use of humor and was a fun read. Do update because I would like to read about a cetain pervert getting his butt kicked (Though I thought that more of a job for Vegeta seeing as Roshi is around Happosai's level of skill.) This is a good fun fic so please keep it going because we all know that we need a good laugh once in a while.
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Title: Battle Clash
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: August 16, 2004 02:43 EDT
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I think Roshi would get the unmarried girls and girls who doesn't have boyfriends in Nermia by beating the hell of Happosi. I have a feeling that Ryouga might change due to Gohan and Videl's influnce and as long as Ryouga stay away from angry ChiChi. This is the guide to the weakest to stongest Z-crew and they are ChiChi/Videl Yamcha Roshi Krillian/Tien 18 Bra/Pan/Marrion/Saiyan from the Tree Of Might/ Goten/Trunks Piccolo Gohan Vegita Goku
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Reviewed By: an author On: August 15, 2004 21:06 EDT
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ok i have to point this out. in dragonball z when they went to planet namek it was found out that namekians ARE A-SEXUAL meaning they DO NOT have reproductive organs like humans do. they can only reproduce via an egg that is spit out of their mouths. piccolo daimo did this in the DRAGON BALL series which gave birth to piccolo aka ma-junior. the currentl piccolo who trained gohan. he cannot have any sexual relations with kasumi or any other human. it is physically impossible. just to give you all a heads up. other than that i look forward to the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Neigix On: August 11, 2004 17:54 EDT
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so far great, but I'm surprised that you didn't set a match of Ranma and Turles or Krillin and Taro to round things out. (ranma's being a dummy battle to fool them) anyhow waiting for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: an author On: August 06, 2004 23:55 EDT
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interesting megatron, very interesting. although don't put ranma with mousse -shudders- that is just FUCKING DISGUSTING!!! i suggest a matchup with ranma and maybe someone else. yeah majorly someone else like Bra or some made up character. oh yeah nice self insert just please leave ranma straight and interested in women. thanks.
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: August 06, 2004 19:42 EDT
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Good chapter
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Reviewed By: r On: August 05, 2004 06:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh man i hope the nwc has their life insurances policies paid up between five pissed off sayians one android out for blood we will see alot of violence and property damage
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Reviewed By: an author On: August 03, 2004 23:24 EDT
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gods that was a funny ass chapter. hell i almost fell off of my chair laughing. more more!!
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: August 03, 2004 19:10 EDT
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Great story. I have a question. Are you going to leave Ranma with his curse or what?
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Reviewed By: Gnome Power! On: August 02, 2004 02:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, you updated! It looks like some of the people in Nerima are going to be on the receiving end of some much deserved vengeance.
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Reviewed By: an author On: August 01, 2004 23:11 EDT
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ok i read this on fanfiction.net and it has improved with a couple of exeptions. ONE in the uncut, unedited version of DBZ they DON'T use HFIL that is an american fuck up by majorly far. the proper term is HELL. secondly TURLES was in a movie and said movie had nothing to do with the series. sorry but that is a bad thing. thirdly i know for a fact that TURLES didn't have a child, neither did anyone of goku's clan did. finally if TURLES did have a child he would have been full saiyajin and the dragon whisker would not have affecte ranma what so ever as a saiyajins hair if they are full blooded doesn't grow. ranma would have to be half blooded and that isn't possible cause Turles didn't have a human mate... there are a lot of plot holes that need to be closed up. if they are fixed then in the end the plot will become better and more enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: avid reader who shall not be named On: June 24, 2004 18:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, i believe i have been waiting quite patiently.....UPDATE ALREADY!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. I WANT TO SEE SOME NERIMA ASS GET KICKED BY SUPER PEOPLE!!!!
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Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 21:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Would you update it already, I really want to read more!
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Reviewed By: Dark Topaz [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 14:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait for more
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Demon-Mazoku On: February 25, 2004 20:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... This is more original than some of the other xovers I've seen! I'd love to see what happens next!
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