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Reviewed By: AnimeQueen85 On: November 29, 2004 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great story! It was so great that I couldn't even stop reading it. I'm a big fan of Ty/Ka pairing stories. Is there going to be a sequal story after this and if so, when is it coming out? Hope that you keep writing stories with more of Tyson/Kai in it. I had also enjoyed reading the lemon scenes as well. Before reading yours, I never thought that anyone could write one as creative as yours. I have always enjoyed reading different fics that has yaoi pairings, with Ty/Ka being my favorite, of course!!! I hope that you continue writing more stories in the near future and keep up the good work. TY/KA FOREVER!!!!! -AnimeQueen85
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 05:48 CST
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*sniff* I got caught up in that ending... thanks! You mentioned something about a sequal in here... haven't come across anything like that yet, so that means you haven't done one yet? Oh, this was such a good story! I'm so impressed! you've made the Tyson/Kai pairing my favorite... and Kai is my favorite all time bey character! Now, I'm off to read another fic... keep up this wonderful work of yours!
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Reviewed By: Siren_44 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved your story. Normally, I'm not a huge fan of Kai/Tyson pairings because a many authors (who will remain nameless) do a really shitty job of writing believable events leading up to such a pairing. I certainly don't think that I could pull it off! I take my hat off to you.
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Reviewed By: black_wings On: October 29, 2004 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's so coollllll! i love it! i really love! i do hope you'll write! write more ty-ka fanfics ^_^
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Title: crying
Reviewed By: darkflame7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a totally freakin awesome fanfic ever!!!!! made ya laugh made ya cry!! well for me mostly cry! i just loved it so much!!! but, whats going to happen to ty and kai, and max and rei??? *starts crying* it was just so awesome and everyhing!! are you going to be writing a sequal??? beause that would be so awesomly cool if you did write one!!!!
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Title: have you ever
Reviewed By: jewl On: June 11, 2004 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude i'm am so not going to do that thing that it want's me to do all iv got to say is awsome fic!!!
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Title: y.a.17
Reviewed By: yamialex17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 14:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
dude that's was such a tease chapter i loved it (4)so far it my fav chapter oh if there's more stories like this from you pplz tell me i'm yamialex17 bye
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Reviewed By: Amiira Avi On: May 07, 2004 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*falls over twitching* Ack! I cannot believe that you don't have something like 400 reviews or so already! You totally deserve 'em, that's for sure! Wai. This fanfic is amazing. It's not some dull, common PWP (porn without plot), as so many fanfics are in this day and age. The lemons weren't so long that they became unnefective, but not so detailed that they made the reader feel uncomfortable. You've come up with a different plot line, but not one that was so off course that the reader cannot picture the characters actually in this situation. You ended the story well, and didn't rush through the story so quickly that it didn't make sense. Some stories are so long and descripive that they dull the reader, but this held my attentions and made me sit up and pay attention throughout. Commendable! In my ratings, I'm extremely critical, and normally rate fics (even if they are VERY good) at the highest, an eight or nine. Wai, but this time, I could NOT honestly say that this fic deserved anything below a 10 in every section (I noticed a couple of spelling mistakes, but those were just tiny mistakes eg. 'to' rather than 'two', and such.) As I said previously, I am amazed that this fanfiction hasn't earned 400 or so reviews already. Absolutely amazing work. I suppose I should shut up now. -_-' Congrats on the completion of the fic, Amiira Avi
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Reviewed By: DeathGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very good!! ^_^ The best yaoi fanfic of Beyblade I've read!! Keep writing and making more fanfics. Be happy(unlike me)x_x Rock On!!
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Title: have you ever
Reviewed By: I am the death of real On: April 28, 2004 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is beautiful. Its simply fantastic. Can't wait for the sequel. Cheers to you!
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Title: inulover16
Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm almost done reading the fic and have to say that i can't wait to get home to read the rest. this is my first bay fic I have read and i want to thank you for writing such an amazing fic. i have now decide to read the rest of your fics and other bay fics...ja ne
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Title: Have you ever
Reviewed By: Dragona15 On: April 22, 2004 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG DAMN KALI UR SO DAMN GREAT!!!!!! THIS ISH SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO SWEET! SO BEAUTIFUL SO CUTEY!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sniffles* I LUV IT GURL!!!!!!! CANT WIAT TA SEE DA SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YYYYYYYYYYYYYIIIIIIIIIIHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!! YEAH!!!!!!!! U ROX UR FICS ROX EVERYTHING ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOX!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^****************************AWWWWWWWWW !!!!!! SOS WEET WHEN KAI PUT HIMSELF ON HIS KNEES AND ALL!!!!!!! *cries* KIDO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: *sniffles!*
Reviewed By: CrazyJen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 12:52 CDT
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UWAAA!! The end!!! *sniffle...CRIES!!* Mou such a wonderfull ending to such a wonderfull fic! *superglomp* Mn i cant believe its really the end................:( .....................BUt that lemon sure was hot and and OMG the last bit with kai.on his knees!!!!!!! on his KNEES!!!!!!! AAAW uwa thats sooooo great! yeah! *sniffle sniffle* Okay hum............*huggles* No thanks really!!! I loved this story so much and you are one of my best buds on msn!! so. tweas my honour! lol hahhahaha Okay stoppin now.......................CANT WAIT FOR THE SEQ!!!!!! Jen
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Reviewed By: Kai-lovr On: April 22, 2004 02:57 CDT
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Hi, I remember reading this on fanfiction.net. When I found out it was gone, I was really peeved off since I didn't know what happened, but when I found it again, I was so happy. I absolutely love this fic. You're doing a sequal aren't you? If you do, could you post it on both Fanfiction.net and Mediaminer? I hope you can. I loved both Kai and Tyson in this fic. Driger was so funny in my opinion and during the middle of the story, I loved the little complication between Rei and Max, that was funny. I loved all the bitbeasts' personalities and all the characters' personalities. I loved the whole fic! Well I hope your sequal comes out soon (if your doing one)! Your lemon scenes were great by the way! ^_^ Could you please email me at: kai_lovr@hotmail.com when you post your sequal up? I'd be heaps happy if you could. Thanks.
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Title: The heat is about to break.
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to be honest with you, Kali-san, I only started reading this when someone had the sheer audacity to mention your story and mine as being the two best Beyblade stories she'd ever read. Well. Your story (I've only gotten through 10 chapters so far, bare with me, I'm not the world's fastest reader,) is amazingly well written, the couplings are fresh and inventive and the humour is straight to the point and dazzling, the angst is just dandy and the personalities are cute and understandable. The only thing I've found wrong so far is the fine lack of detail in scence setting. You're build up of suspence is killing me and I can't wait to find out what happens when all hell breaks loose. Now here's the real meat; you've gotten my fire boiling, Kali-san, and it's at a pretty high temperature, you've got the talent that makes me itch to know who'se better, you or me? I like your writing style, and I can see why it's so highly praised, but on that level, I wonder if some friendly competition wouldn't make you glow with all the Powers of the Pen combined. I like your style enough to want to do better, something not many people invoke in me. But I wonder if I could. You're truly brilliant, Kali-san, and I hope you accept this little challenge... but for the moment, I have a hot little story with your name on it, begging for me to finish reading. Keep up the awesome and inspiring work!
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