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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is really good please update soon!!! ^_^ I really like it!!!
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Reviewed By: darksqall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 14:07 CST
Comment/Review:
it was pretty good o plz update doon O-O pweez???
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 12:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed this and even more it seemed more real than some of the other fics. id like to see you extend this rather than end it too quick. your style of writing was good too, not to many mistakes.
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: Melphina_xgp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 07:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iloved it. Most people make it too hard on themselves and make Inuyasha kill him as soon as they get there. Like Naraku would be that easy to kill. He'd have some tricks up his sleeve!This story had a simple and easy way of beating Naraku.I think it's a good thing that you decided not to rush the story. Gives us something to read and look forward to. Well, Hope you come up with the second chapter soon. GOOD LUCK and update soon!
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